Friday Tally
New pages written: 6 (goal: 6.2 pages per day)
Old pages revised on paper: none
Pages of revisions typed in: none
Pages lost or gained due to revisions: 0
Total page count to date: 212 (goal: 200) for sure closer to 215 now.
Days remaining until D-day: 5 days
Emails from editor in UK: 1 (asking me whether I would have the manuscript done by the 31st. I said yes!)
Emails from agent in NY: 0
Chocolate consumed: Peanut m&ms at lunch, German chocolate cake slice at dinner
Junk food consumed: soda and wine
Exercise: Skiing!
Television watched: none
Tears: none
Link for the day: Mt Bachelor! This is where we are skiing this weekend.
I managed to get a scene written last night after everyone went to bed. I'll try to do the same thing tonight.
We're having a blast. Skiing has been so much fun. My legs are sore and I realize just how out of shape I am, but it's been a blast. The kidlets are loving ski school. Mackenna moved up a level; Finn moved up two levels. Rose didn't hate day care, but she didn't exactly love it, either, and cried the last hour.
Had a wonderful dinner with our new friends tonight. And our other friends arrived safely and all four kidlets are sleeping together in the loft.
I still have some writing to do so that's about it for now.
Hope you're having a great weekend!
Friday, January 26, 2007
Thursday, January 25, 2007
And we're off...
Wednesday's Pathetic Tally
New pages written: 5 (goal: 6.2 pages per day)
Old pages revised on paper: But rewrote a scene and cut another one
Pages of revisions typed in: none
Pages lost or gained due to revisions: -5
Total page count to date: 206 (goal: 200) for sure closer to 215 now.
Days remaining until D-day: 6 days
Emails from editor in UK: 0
Emails from agent in NY: 0 (contracts read, signed and to be mailed on way out)
Chocolate consumed: none (how sad is that!)
Junk food consumed: ice cream
Exercise: Pilates tape (broke down and bought one at class on Monday. Couldn't remember what to do at home.)
Television watched: A little of AI while I folded laundry and sorted socks
Tears: None!
Link for the day: Hiro's blog! This is a blog by Hiro, fan-favorite from NBC's Heroes.
Not as much writing as I'd liked, but it was Wednesday (plus trying to get ready for trip) so I knew not to expect a lot. I managed to get all the laundry done so now I can pack. I also asked for help on a hiking forum I belong to to come up with the locale for the final scene and got back a few really good suggestions! This was the final missing piece of research I needed. So yay! Now I just have to pick one.
Hubby came home from work a little before I had to leave to pickup Rose and surprised me with a new cell phone. It's very cute. Much smaller and lighter than my other one. Hot pink with iTunes and a camera.
I'm so excited to be heading to Bend today. Yes, I feel a bit guilty, but I will be working while I'm there. Just at night, not during the day. I should be able to blog, too. At least last year I could.
I bought myself a helmet. Back when I skied before kidlets, nobody really wore them but I want to set a good example for the kidlets. Plus it just seems like a good idea given some of the recent accidents I've read about. The helmet is pretty cool as far as helmets go. It has built-in speakers with a hook-up for your phone and iPod so you can listen to tunes on the lift ride. I probably won't use those features, but it was the helmet that fit the best so I bought it.
All these new toys! I still need to buy a camera on our way out of town. Thanks to everyone who posted review sites! Just wish they'd tell you exactly which one to buy! I've got a list though so hopefully it'll be an easy choice when I see them.
I wanted to mention something NaNoWriMo is doing for 2007. They've got a new challenge going called the year of doing big, fun, scary things together. We've got until October to accomplish at least one of them to get a certificate. Here's what I posted:
1) Finish NaNoWriMo 06 novel
2) Make all contractual deadlines (no extensions in 07!)
3) Conquer fear of heights - climb, skydive or something else vertically challenging
4) Participate in Script Frenzy in June
5) Finally hit the 50K mark of NaNoWriMo 07
6) Get back on skis this winter
I'll be checking off #6 on Friday! Do you have any big, fun, scary things you want to try to do in 2007? What are they?
New pages written: 5 (goal: 6.2 pages per day)
Old pages revised on paper: But rewrote a scene and cut another one
Pages of revisions typed in: none
Pages lost or gained due to revisions: -5
Total page count to date: 206 (goal: 200) for sure closer to 215 now.
Days remaining until D-day: 6 days
Emails from editor in UK: 0
Emails from agent in NY: 0 (contracts read, signed and to be mailed on way out)
Chocolate consumed: none (how sad is that!)
Junk food consumed: ice cream
Exercise: Pilates tape (broke down and bought one at class on Monday. Couldn't remember what to do at home.)
Television watched: A little of AI while I folded laundry and sorted socks
Tears: None!
Link for the day: Hiro's blog! This is a blog by Hiro, fan-favorite from NBC's Heroes.
Not as much writing as I'd liked, but it was Wednesday (plus trying to get ready for trip) so I knew not to expect a lot. I managed to get all the laundry done so now I can pack. I also asked for help on a hiking forum I belong to to come up with the locale for the final scene and got back a few really good suggestions! This was the final missing piece of research I needed. So yay! Now I just have to pick one.
Hubby came home from work a little before I had to leave to pickup Rose and surprised me with a new cell phone. It's very cute. Much smaller and lighter than my other one. Hot pink with iTunes and a camera.
I'm so excited to be heading to Bend today. Yes, I feel a bit guilty, but I will be working while I'm there. Just at night, not during the day. I should be able to blog, too. At least last year I could.
I bought myself a helmet. Back when I skied before kidlets, nobody really wore them but I want to set a good example for the kidlets. Plus it just seems like a good idea given some of the recent accidents I've read about. The helmet is pretty cool as far as helmets go. It has built-in speakers with a hook-up for your phone and iPod so you can listen to tunes on the lift ride. I probably won't use those features, but it was the helmet that fit the best so I bought it.
All these new toys! I still need to buy a camera on our way out of town. Thanks to everyone who posted review sites! Just wish they'd tell you exactly which one to buy! I've got a list though so hopefully it'll be an easy choice when I see them.
I wanted to mention something NaNoWriMo is doing for 2007. They've got a new challenge going called the year of doing big, fun, scary things together. We've got until October to accomplish at least one of them to get a certificate. Here's what I posted:
1) Finish NaNoWriMo 06 novel
2) Make all contractual deadlines (no extensions in 07!)
3) Conquer fear of heights - climb, skydive or something else vertically challenging
4) Participate in Script Frenzy in June
5) Finally hit the 50K mark of NaNoWriMo 07
6) Get back on skis this winter
I'll be checking off #6 on Friday! Do you have any big, fun, scary things you want to try to do in 2007? What are they?
Wednesday, January 24, 2007
A week to go
Tuesday Tally
New pages written: 7 (goal: 6.2 pages per day)
Old pages revised on paper: none
Pages of revisions typed in: none
Pages lost or gained due to revisions: 0
Total page count to date: 206 (goal: 200) for sure closer to 215 now.
Days remaining until D-day: 7 days
Emails from editor in UK: 0
Emails from agent in NY: 0 (still haven't read my contracts)
Chocolate consumed: 2 small pieces of Hershey's bar
Junk food consumed: Non-fat Vanilla steamer, part of muffin, Tillamook cheeseburger, fries and Sprite
Exercise: none
Television watched: A little of AI
Tears: A few. I'm definitely stressed.
Link for the day: Invasion! A recap of an amazing show that ABC should have never cancelled and replaced with The Nine. Wednesdays at 10 o'clock just aren't the same without my weekly Invasion fix.
I need to write so just a quick recap today.
In case you're interested in the book, the teams have left Seychelles and are at the Monza racetrack north of Milan. I'm having fun with this scene even though my heroine is only driving in the background while the hero chats with two male competitors! Still I wish I could do this part of the research in person. I'd love to drive the track myself.
I met my NaNoWriMo buddy at a coffee placed called Papacinno's in the Burlingame area of Portland yesterday. They have comfy chairs that are perfect for writing. This is where we met in November for NaNo. Not sure how the coffee is since I don't drink the stuff, but my friend seems to like it. The baristas are very friendly. I should have gone there when I was writing Plain Jane's Prince Charming!
I ordered my usual non-fat vanilla steamer. Boring, but tasty. I'd forgotten to eat breakfast again so I ordered a raspberry crumb muffin. Really dry. Not worth the calories. Won't do that again. I wished I'd brought an apple with me and was seriously craving a piece of Hobee's coffee cake (my fave from the SF Bay Area.) Papacinno is a WiFi hotspot, but since I needed to write not fool around on the Internet I left the iBook at home and brought my alphie instead. I really can be disciplined on occasion.
I'm hoping I can be disciplined today. I not only need to finish the complete, but pack, read my two contracts and touch base with the house/cat sitter who'll be coming tomorrow. I don't like leaving my furbabies alone! I unfortunately never know what I'll come home to. Of course, I'm back to my impossible-to-write Wednesday schedule so it should be interesting how I squeeze it all in.
A local radio station K105.1 is giving away a man for a week. Sounds interesting, but what I really need are an extra couple hours each day between now and D-day.
Anybody have any time saving tips they want to share?
Right now I'm just not sleeping, but it's starting to catch up with me and that's not a good thing with another week to go.
New pages written: 7 (goal: 6.2 pages per day)
Old pages revised on paper: none
Pages of revisions typed in: none
Pages lost or gained due to revisions: 0
Total page count to date: 206 (goal: 200) for sure closer to 215 now.
Days remaining until D-day: 7 days
Emails from editor in UK: 0
Emails from agent in NY: 0 (still haven't read my contracts)
Chocolate consumed: 2 small pieces of Hershey's bar
Junk food consumed: Non-fat Vanilla steamer, part of muffin, Tillamook cheeseburger, fries and Sprite
Exercise: none
Television watched: A little of AI
Tears: A few. I'm definitely stressed.
Link for the day: Invasion! A recap of an amazing show that ABC should have never cancelled and replaced with The Nine. Wednesdays at 10 o'clock just aren't the same without my weekly Invasion fix.
I need to write so just a quick recap today.
In case you're interested in the book, the teams have left Seychelles and are at the Monza racetrack north of Milan. I'm having fun with this scene even though my heroine is only driving in the background while the hero chats with two male competitors! Still I wish I could do this part of the research in person. I'd love to drive the track myself.
I met my NaNoWriMo buddy at a coffee placed called Papacinno's in the Burlingame area of Portland yesterday. They have comfy chairs that are perfect for writing. This is where we met in November for NaNo. Not sure how the coffee is since I don't drink the stuff, but my friend seems to like it. The baristas are very friendly. I should have gone there when I was writing Plain Jane's Prince Charming!
I ordered my usual non-fat vanilla steamer. Boring, but tasty. I'd forgotten to eat breakfast again so I ordered a raspberry crumb muffin. Really dry. Not worth the calories. Won't do that again. I wished I'd brought an apple with me and was seriously craving a piece of Hobee's coffee cake (my fave from the SF Bay Area.) Papacinno is a WiFi hotspot, but since I needed to write not fool around on the Internet I left the iBook at home and brought my alphie instead. I really can be disciplined on occasion.
I'm hoping I can be disciplined today. I not only need to finish the complete, but pack, read my two contracts and touch base with the house/cat sitter who'll be coming tomorrow. I don't like leaving my furbabies alone! I unfortunately never know what I'll come home to. Of course, I'm back to my impossible-to-write Wednesday schedule so it should be interesting how I squeeze it all in.
A local radio station K105.1 is giving away a man for a week. Sounds interesting, but what I really need are an extra couple hours each day between now and D-day.
Anybody have any time saving tips they want to share?
Right now I'm just not sleeping, but it's starting to catch up with me and that's not a good thing with another week to go.
Tuesday, January 23, 2007
Heroes Love Fest
Monday Tally
New pages written: 4 (goal: 6.2 pages per day)
Old pages revised on paper: Chapter 8 (this actually took most of my time yesterday)
Pages of revisions typed in: Chapter 8 (it's much better now)
Pages lost or gained due to revisions: 0
Total page count to date: 199 (goal: 200) for sure closer to 215 now.
Days remaining until D-day: 8 days
Emails from editor in UK: 0
Emails from agent in NY: 0 (though I really need to read my contracts tomorrow)
Chocolate consumed: ice cream
Junk food consumed: powdered donut
Exercise: Pilates session
Television watched: Heroes (see below)
Tears: None
Link for the day: My new cover! Sorry for this BSP, but I was so busy writing (imagine that!) I didn't have time to find a fun link so I figured I'd show off my April release that just went up on Amazon.
Although I love each and every one of the heroes from my books, I'm not love festing over them today. I am, however, loving the NBC show Heroes. Great new episode. Best show on television hands down.
Isaac the painter is so hot now that he's no longer a heroin junkie. That whole drug thing was a real ick factor for me so I'm happy he's clean, healthy and gorgeous. Definitely hero material sans the glowing eyes when he paints the future, of course. Unless one is writing paranormal romance.
The invisible man was so cool, too. I didn't see him coming. Gotta love Peter. He is the heart of the show along with Hiro.
Loved Claire trying to get her best friend Zack back, too. So sweet.
My biggest question is about Linderman. Who is this guy? And why do all roads seem to lead back to him in Las Vegas? Guess we'll find out, but probably not soon enough for me. Still I'm avoiding all spoilers for this show. I do watch the previews but that's it.
What about you? Do you like spoilers for your favorite shows or do you wait to find out what happens?
I'm meeting my NaNoWriMo bud and writing at a coffee shop in Portland this morning. Hope you're having fun wherever you are!
New pages written: 4 (goal: 6.2 pages per day)
Old pages revised on paper: Chapter 8 (this actually took most of my time yesterday)
Pages of revisions typed in: Chapter 8 (it's much better now)
Pages lost or gained due to revisions: 0
Total page count to date: 199 (goal: 200) for sure closer to 215 now.
Days remaining until D-day: 8 days
Emails from editor in UK: 0
Emails from agent in NY: 0 (though I really need to read my contracts tomorrow)
Chocolate consumed: ice cream
Junk food consumed: powdered donut
Exercise: Pilates session
Television watched: Heroes (see below)
Tears: None
Link for the day: My new cover! Sorry for this BSP, but I was so busy writing (imagine that!) I didn't have time to find a fun link so I figured I'd show off my April release that just went up on Amazon.
Although I love each and every one of the heroes from my books, I'm not love festing over them today. I am, however, loving the NBC show Heroes. Great new episode. Best show on television hands down.
Isaac the painter is so hot now that he's no longer a heroin junkie. That whole drug thing was a real ick factor for me so I'm happy he's clean, healthy and gorgeous. Definitely hero material sans the glowing eyes when he paints the future, of course. Unless one is writing paranormal romance.
The invisible man was so cool, too. I didn't see him coming. Gotta love Peter. He is the heart of the show along with Hiro.
Loved Claire trying to get her best friend Zack back, too. So sweet.
My biggest question is about Linderman. Who is this guy? And why do all roads seem to lead back to him in Las Vegas? Guess we'll find out, but probably not soon enough for me. Still I'm avoiding all spoilers for this show. I do watch the previews but that's it.
What about you? Do you like spoilers for your favorite shows or do you wait to find out what happens?
I'm meeting my NaNoWriMo bud and writing at a coffee shop in Portland this morning. Hope you're having fun wherever you are!
Monday, January 22, 2007
Nine and counting
Catch Up Tally
New pages written: a lot (goal: 6.2 pages per day)
Old pages revised on paper: none
Pages of revisions typed in: none
Pages lost or gained due to revisions: none
Total page count to date: 197 (goal: 200) might need to be closer to 215
Days remaining until D-day: 9 days
Emails from editor in UK: 0
Emails from agent in NY: 0
Chocolate consumed: Birthday Cake, chocolate covered strawberries
Junk food consumed: a beer on Saturday, not sure if Baja Fresh for dinner tonight counts or not
Exercise: Pilates on Friday, not really exercise but danced a lot Saturday night, too
Television watched: The Office on Thursday, last three minutes of Colts-Patriots game
Tears: None
Link for the day: Hold on! This video clip gives a glimpse of what it was like for rescuers on Mt. Hood with a Chinook helicopter hovering above them.
A treat for me! My new favorite show Heroes returns tonight. I love that show. The writing, the acting, everything about it. I want to be able to watch guilt-free so that means I will get the required pages finished before 9:00 p.m. I've never missed a broadcast episode yet. That's how I was with Invasion, but Heroes has better ratings so it won't be on the network chopping block. Do you have any must-see television shows?
Not much else to say. All I can think about is the book. Here's a recent exchange between me and hubby.
Hubby: That's a cute smile on your face. Thinking about me?
Me (distracted): Uh, no.
Hubby: The book.
Me (imagining my hero...click and page down to see him): Yep.
Hubby: It's always the book.
And unfortunately right before a deadline, it is all about the book. I can't shut it off. That's just how my brain works.
Do you get tunnel vision about anything you do?
New pages written: a lot (goal: 6.2 pages per day)
Old pages revised on paper: none
Pages of revisions typed in: none
Pages lost or gained due to revisions: none
Total page count to date: 197 (goal: 200) might need to be closer to 215
Days remaining until D-day: 9 days
Emails from editor in UK: 0
Emails from agent in NY: 0
Chocolate consumed: Birthday Cake, chocolate covered strawberries
Junk food consumed: a beer on Saturday, not sure if Baja Fresh for dinner tonight counts or not
Exercise: Pilates on Friday, not really exercise but danced a lot Saturday night, too
Television watched: The Office on Thursday, last three minutes of Colts-Patriots game
Tears: None
Link for the day: Hold on! This video clip gives a glimpse of what it was like for rescuers on Mt. Hood with a Chinook helicopter hovering above them.
A treat for me! My new favorite show Heroes returns tonight. I love that show. The writing, the acting, everything about it. I want to be able to watch guilt-free so that means I will get the required pages finished before 9:00 p.m. I've never missed a broadcast episode yet. That's how I was with Invasion, but Heroes has better ratings so it won't be on the network chopping block. Do you have any must-see television shows?
Not much else to say. All I can think about is the book. Here's a recent exchange between me and hubby.
Hubby: That's a cute smile on your face. Thinking about me?
Me (distracted): Uh, no.
Hubby: The book.
Me (imagining my hero...click and page down to see him): Yep.
Hubby: It's always the book.
And unfortunately right before a deadline, it is all about the book. I can't shut it off. That's just how my brain works.
Do you get tunnel vision about anything you do?
Sunday, January 21, 2007
Into the Cave
My writing goal today is to rough out the remaining parts of the book so I can spend the week rewriting instead of writing. I'm a much better rewriter than writer.
Yesterday was almost a total wash writing wise though the princess tea party was a success (our camera broke 1/4 into it) and the hubby's company party at Greek Cucina in downtown Portland last night was so much fun. We even won a $300 gift certificate from American Airlines, who we affectionately called the Evil Empire when I worked for the Friendly Skies.
I'll post the tally tomorrow. I'm down to single digit countdown to D-day. Panicked, stressed, craving chocolate and wishing there was a hottie hero here to massage my tense shoulders.
Anyone have any recommendations for a new digital camera? That's something I need to get by Thursday and don't have time to do a lot of research! Thanks!
Have a great day!
Yesterday was almost a total wash writing wise though the princess tea party was a success (our camera broke 1/4 into it) and the hubby's company party at Greek Cucina in downtown Portland last night was so much fun. We even won a $300 gift certificate from American Airlines, who we affectionately called the Evil Empire when I worked for the Friendly Skies.
I'll post the tally tomorrow. I'm down to single digit countdown to D-day. Panicked, stressed, craving chocolate and wishing there was a hottie hero here to massage my tense shoulders.
Anyone have any recommendations for a new digital camera? That's something I need to get by Thursday and don't have time to do a lot of research! Thanks!
Have a great day!
Friday, January 19, 2007
The Caped Kitty
Since I have a book due in twelve days I figured I'd totally waste precious writing time by putting together today's blog.
Yes, I am insane. Yes, I am stressed. And no, I have not been drinking, just writing a kissing scene from the hero's POV and the sequel from the heroine's POV that comes next. So procrastination was totally justified. Or maybe not. You decide.
Please click on all links as you read.
This is a story about the Caped Kitty?
The Caped Kitty looked like your typical kitten growing up, but this cat was special. This adorable fur ball had amazing superhero powers.
As an adult cat, the Caped Kitty discovered its special abilities, and now wearing a flowing red cape performs breathtaking rescues with no regard for its own safety or aversion to water. After all, what good are nine lives if you can't use eight of them to save others?
Besides the gratification of being a super hero and buying additional capes with proceeds from its own line of Cafe Press items including T-shirts and coffee mugs, the Caped Kitty has been voted the number one crush by felines across the globe. It even has a fan club and groupies.
Other cats may claim to have super powers, but they are just wanna-be super heroes.
There is only one Caped Kitty.
The end.
Note: I found the photos on flickr.com. I do not know any of the cats, their owners or the individuals who took the photographs. I just thought they were fun shots so I hope they don't mind!
Yes, I am insane. Yes, I am stressed. And no, I have not been drinking, just writing a kissing scene from the hero's POV and the sequel from the heroine's POV that comes next. So procrastination was totally justified. Or maybe not. You decide.
Please click on all links as you read.
This is a story about the Caped Kitty?
The Caped Kitty looked like your typical kitten growing up, but this cat was special. This adorable fur ball had amazing superhero powers.
As an adult cat, the Caped Kitty discovered its special abilities, and now wearing a flowing red cape performs breathtaking rescues with no regard for its own safety or aversion to water. After all, what good are nine lives if you can't use eight of them to save others?
Besides the gratification of being a super hero and buying additional capes with proceeds from its own line of Cafe Press items including T-shirts and coffee mugs, the Caped Kitty has been voted the number one crush by felines across the globe. It even has a fan club and groupies.
Other cats may claim to have super powers, but they are just wanna-be super heroes.
There is only one Caped Kitty.
The end.
Note: I found the photos on flickr.com. I do not know any of the cats, their owners or the individuals who took the photographs. I just thought they were fun shots so I hope they don't mind!
Thursday, January 18, 2007
Not another...
Snow day.
Yep. The kidlets have no school again. That's no school so far this week if anyone was counting.
Of course, hubby made it into work today. He fed the kids, turned on the television and left. I never woke up. So now that I am awake, I'm taking off my writer hat. I can't complain. The last two days were so great. I didn't have to cook or clean or any of that other domestic stuff. I only had to write and give out hugs and kisses as required.
I'll try to post a tally later, if not tomorrow.
Last night, I managed to get a lot of the upcoming princess tea party stuff done while I watched American Idol. Gotta say, they really made Seattle look bad talent wise. Not sure if they edited the show that way or if not many talented singers showed up, but it was really bad. Funny though. Just when you thought it couldn't get any worse...here they were. Even hubby, who only likes watching talking heads and sports, was into it.
Did you see American Idol last night? What did you think?
Yep. The kidlets have no school again. That's no school so far this week if anyone was counting.
Of course, hubby made it into work today. He fed the kids, turned on the television and left. I never woke up. So now that I am awake, I'm taking off my writer hat. I can't complain. The last two days were so great. I didn't have to cook or clean or any of that other domestic stuff. I only had to write and give out hugs and kisses as required.
I'll try to post a tally later, if not tomorrow.
Last night, I managed to get a lot of the upcoming princess tea party stuff done while I watched American Idol. Gotta say, they really made Seattle look bad talent wise. Not sure if they edited the show that way or if not many talented singers showed up, but it was really bad. Funny though. Just when you thought it couldn't get any worse...here they were. Even hubby, who only likes watching talking heads and sports, was into it.
Did you see American Idol last night? What did you think?
Wednesday, January 17, 2007
Winter white
Catchup Tally
New pages written: 4 (goal: 6.2 pages per day)
Old pages revised on paper: Chapters Prologue, 1-3 on paper; Chapters 5-7, half of 8 on screen
Pages of revisions typed in: 50
Pages lost or gained due to revisions: +5
Total page count to date: 178 (goal: 200)
Days remaining until D-day: 14 days (YIKES!)
Emails from editor in UK: 0
Emails from agent in NY: 0 (but my contracts arrived on Saturday)
Chocolate consumed: Hershey's bar, chocolate ice cream
Junk food consumed: none
Exercise: Pilates Session on Monday
Television watched: a little American Idle on Tuesday
Tears: None.
Link for the day: Slipping and sliding in Portland Check out this snow day video taken from someone who lives in downtown Portland.
School has been cancelled once again. I don't even want to think what this will mean at the end of the school year. With the MLK holiday on Monday that means the youngest kidlet misses an entire week of preschool.
The only good news is hubby can't get to work, either, so I actually got a lot of writing done yesterday. I went through the entire book. Well, all that I'd written so far except for the last chapter.
Today, which is usually my busiest day of the week so I normally don't write, is now totally free. Everything has been cancelled so I get to write. Hmmm. Maybe this snow thing isn't so bad afterall!
If you want to see what driving conditions can be like around here when it gets really bad, check out the link for the day. Why didn't they put on chains or just stay home? That's my questions. I really wonder what's going to happen to those people's insurance premiums!
I learned to drive in Eastern Washington. Liberty Lake, outside of Spokane near the Idaho border, to be exact. Driving in snow was a requirement if you wanted to go anywhere in the winter. Once my friend high school friend Becky was driving a bunch of us somewhere. We hit a patch of black ice and spun. I still remember all of us screaming. Luckily we didn't hit anything though we were in one of those huge, gas-guzzling made of steel kind of parent cars from the 1980s. We all laughed and went on our way. No big deal.
Here in the Portland metro area though, you have many people who have no clue how to drive in snow, a city that at least yesterday seemed overwhelmed by the amount that fell and most importantly, ice. Ice just sucks.
During one of the big ice storms (1996, I think) hubby and I had flown up from SF to visit my parents. The ice storm hit as we were driving back from the coast. I didn't want my parents to take us to the airport so we took a shuttle from the Salem Airport. Near the Portland Airport (PDX) there was a chain reaction accident due to ice. We hit the shuttle van in front of us, someone else hit us. The vans stopped. We were sitting on I-205 right by a patch of ice watching semi trucks slide toward us. Not fun. And very scary. One came really close. I was sure it would hit us. Hubby told me to get off. Even though the driver said no, we did anyway. Another man explained to the driver that we were nothing more than a sitting target. The driver didn't care. Those were the rules. That guy and his wife got off too. We all climbed high up this cemented incline and waited under an overpass. When another truck brushed by the van, the rest of the occupants joined us. We finally made it to the airport where a lovely customer service rep for Alaska Airlines, upon hearing what we'd been through on our trip to PDX, put us on an earlier flight with no additional charge.
How is the weather where you are? Sunny, wet, snowy?
New pages written: 4 (goal: 6.2 pages per day)
Old pages revised on paper: Chapters Prologue, 1-3 on paper; Chapters 5-7, half of 8 on screen
Pages of revisions typed in: 50
Pages lost or gained due to revisions: +5
Total page count to date: 178 (goal: 200)
Days remaining until D-day: 14 days (YIKES!)
Emails from editor in UK: 0
Emails from agent in NY: 0 (but my contracts arrived on Saturday)
Chocolate consumed: Hershey's bar, chocolate ice cream
Junk food consumed: none
Exercise: Pilates Session on Monday
Television watched: a little American Idle on Tuesday
Tears: None.
Link for the day: Slipping and sliding in Portland Check out this snow day video taken from someone who lives in downtown Portland.
School has been cancelled once again. I don't even want to think what this will mean at the end of the school year. With the MLK holiday on Monday that means the youngest kidlet misses an entire week of preschool.
The only good news is hubby can't get to work, either, so I actually got a lot of writing done yesterday. I went through the entire book. Well, all that I'd written so far except for the last chapter.
Today, which is usually my busiest day of the week so I normally don't write, is now totally free. Everything has been cancelled so I get to write. Hmmm. Maybe this snow thing isn't so bad afterall!
If you want to see what driving conditions can be like around here when it gets really bad, check out the link for the day. Why didn't they put on chains or just stay home? That's my questions. I really wonder what's going to happen to those people's insurance premiums!
I learned to drive in Eastern Washington. Liberty Lake, outside of Spokane near the Idaho border, to be exact. Driving in snow was a requirement if you wanted to go anywhere in the winter. Once my friend high school friend Becky was driving a bunch of us somewhere. We hit a patch of black ice and spun. I still remember all of us screaming. Luckily we didn't hit anything though we were in one of those huge, gas-guzzling made of steel kind of parent cars from the 1980s. We all laughed and went on our way. No big deal.
Here in the Portland metro area though, you have many people who have no clue how to drive in snow, a city that at least yesterday seemed overwhelmed by the amount that fell and most importantly, ice. Ice just sucks.
During one of the big ice storms (1996, I think) hubby and I had flown up from SF to visit my parents. The ice storm hit as we were driving back from the coast. I didn't want my parents to take us to the airport so we took a shuttle from the Salem Airport. Near the Portland Airport (PDX) there was a chain reaction accident due to ice. We hit the shuttle van in front of us, someone else hit us. The vans stopped. We were sitting on I-205 right by a patch of ice watching semi trucks slide toward us. Not fun. And very scary. One came really close. I was sure it would hit us. Hubby told me to get off. Even though the driver said no, we did anyway. Another man explained to the driver that we were nothing more than a sitting target. The driver didn't care. Those were the rules. That guy and his wife got off too. We all climbed high up this cemented incline and waited under an overpass. When another truck brushed by the van, the rest of the occupants joined us. We finally made it to the airport where a lovely customer service rep for Alaska Airlines, upon hearing what we'd been through on our trip to PDX, put us on an earlier flight with no additional charge.
How is the weather where you are? Sunny, wet, snowy?
Tuesday, January 16, 2007
Arrrgh!
Another snow day. No school for the kidlets today.
No tally today. Hubby's got the kids outside playing and sledding in our front yard. Must take advantage of every minute I get.
Panic is setting in. 15 days until D-day. The virtual deadline gun pointed at my head... the safety just got released.
I really gotta get the book done. Either that, or have one of my heroes come to life and take me away from all this!
No tally today. Hubby's got the kids outside playing and sledding in our front yard. Must take advantage of every minute I get.
Panic is setting in. 15 days until D-day. The virtual deadline gun pointed at my head... the safety just got released.
I really gotta get the book done. Either that, or have one of my heroes come to life and take me away from all this!
Monday, January 15, 2007
Playdates
This tally is for the entire weekend:
New pages written: 4 (goal: 6.2 pages per day)
Old pages revised on paper: Chapter 6 and 7 on screen
Pages of revisions typed in: 0
Pages lost or gained due to revisions: +6
Total page count to date: 169 (goal: 200)
Days remaining until D-day: 16 days
Emails from editor in UK: 0
Emails from agent in NY: 0 (but my contracts arrived on Saturday)
Chocolate consumed: Slice of cake, Mint chocolate chip ice cream, two pieces of a Hershey's bar
Junk food consumed: None, unless you want to count a glass of Merlot on Sunday and a pint of Hefeweizen on Saturday.
Exercise: Danced
Television watched: A few minutes of the Seahawks-Bears playoff game
Tears: None.
Link for the day: The Husband Store Check out this funny from the talented Carly Phillips.
Not much to report except I wrote and wrote some more. I ended up with 10 additional pages between revised and new ones. YAY! And I even critiqued two chapters for my critique partner! A very productive day in the cave, but it's late and I am very tired.
I did learn something new during dinner from the kidlets.
Finn: Mommy, did you know that Will Turner has the same birthday as Rose.
Me: Really?
Hubby: Will Turner?
Me: Pirates of the Caribbean.
Hubby: Oh.
Mackenna: It's not Will Turner, but the actor who played him. His birthday is January 13th.
Rose: That's my birthday.
Me: Orlando Bloom.
Three blank stares from kidlets.
Me: He's the actor who played Will Turner.
Kidlets: Oh.
Rose: I want to have a playdate with him.
Me to myself: I would't mind one myself!
The dinner conversation got me thinking. If you could have a playdate with anyone, fictional character or real person, who would you choose?
Anyone want to guess who I would choose?
New pages written: 4 (goal: 6.2 pages per day)
Old pages revised on paper: Chapter 6 and 7 on screen
Pages of revisions typed in: 0
Pages lost or gained due to revisions: +6
Total page count to date: 169 (goal: 200)
Days remaining until D-day: 16 days
Emails from editor in UK: 0
Emails from agent in NY: 0 (but my contracts arrived on Saturday)
Chocolate consumed: Slice of cake, Mint chocolate chip ice cream, two pieces of a Hershey's bar
Junk food consumed: None, unless you want to count a glass of Merlot on Sunday and a pint of Hefeweizen on Saturday.
Exercise: Danced
Television watched: A few minutes of the Seahawks-Bears playoff game
Tears: None.
Link for the day: The Husband Store Check out this funny from the talented Carly Phillips.
Not much to report except I wrote and wrote some more. I ended up with 10 additional pages between revised and new ones. YAY! And I even critiqued two chapters for my critique partner! A very productive day in the cave, but it's late and I am very tired.
I did learn something new during dinner from the kidlets.
Finn: Mommy, did you know that Will Turner has the same birthday as Rose.
Me: Really?
Hubby: Will Turner?
Me: Pirates of the Caribbean.
Hubby: Oh.
Mackenna: It's not Will Turner, but the actor who played him. His birthday is January 13th.
Rose: That's my birthday.
Me: Orlando Bloom.
Three blank stares from kidlets.
Me: He's the actor who played Will Turner.
Kidlets: Oh.
Rose: I want to have a playdate with him.
Me to myself: I would't mind one myself!
The dinner conversation got me thinking. If you could have a playdate with anyone, fictional character or real person, who would you choose?
Anyone want to guess who I would choose?
Sunday, January 14, 2007
Birthday Day Recap
Yesterday was a fun, but full day.
The oldest kidlets had a swim meet. Both placed first in a race, but Finn blew everyone away in his individual freestyle and his freestyle relay leg. This was a kid, who last year had to drop out before the first meet because he just couldn't make it 25 yards without holding onto to the lane ropes.
One of his coaches came up to hubby and wanted to know what had gotten into the kid and where he'd come up with that stroke. Someone behind me heard me cheering and told me his time. This meant nothing to me, since I know nothing about swimming competitively, so she explained he had cut seconds off his qualifying time and would now be grouped with the fastest swimmers. A good thing, I guess. Hubby was all smiles.
After the meet, I asked Finn about his swimming so fast. "It's Rose's birthday, Mommy," he said, smiling. "I wanted to win a ribbon for her."
My heart melted. Such a good big brother. A hero in the making!
After swimming, we had dinner at Joe's Crab Shack. The birthday girl's choice. Then we went home for cake (chocolate with pink icing) and presents. Next week is her birthday party with friends. A princess tea party. I managed to get the invites out on Monday, but that's all I've done so far. Better get on that!
I finally got some writing done once the kidlets were in bed. Considering in two weeks I want to be skiing on Mt. Bachelor, I've really got to get writing.
Today should be a more productive writing day. The entire family is at swim practice. When they get back, we'll attend Mass and then I'll spend the rest of the day in my cave.
Please think pages, pages, pages. Virtual chocolate appreciated, too!
The oldest kidlets had a swim meet. Both placed first in a race, but Finn blew everyone away in his individual freestyle and his freestyle relay leg. This was a kid, who last year had to drop out before the first meet because he just couldn't make it 25 yards without holding onto to the lane ropes.
One of his coaches came up to hubby and wanted to know what had gotten into the kid and where he'd come up with that stroke. Someone behind me heard me cheering and told me his time. This meant nothing to me, since I know nothing about swimming competitively, so she explained he had cut seconds off his qualifying time and would now be grouped with the fastest swimmers. A good thing, I guess. Hubby was all smiles.
After the meet, I asked Finn about his swimming so fast. "It's Rose's birthday, Mommy," he said, smiling. "I wanted to win a ribbon for her."
My heart melted. Such a good big brother. A hero in the making!
After swimming, we had dinner at Joe's Crab Shack. The birthday girl's choice. Then we went home for cake (chocolate with pink icing) and presents. Next week is her birthday party with friends. A princess tea party. I managed to get the invites out on Monday, but that's all I've done so far. Better get on that!
I finally got some writing done once the kidlets were in bed. Considering in two weeks I want to be skiing on Mt. Bachelor, I've really got to get writing.
Today should be a more productive writing day. The entire family is at swim practice. When they get back, we'll attend Mass and then I'll spend the rest of the day in my cave.
Please think pages, pages, pages. Virtual chocolate appreciated, too!
Saturday, January 13, 2007
Four candles for Rose
Today is the youngest kidlet's birthday. I'm having a tough time with it. Four sounds so much older than three. Not that I want another baby. But it's hard to watch that youngest child grow up. Harder than I thought it would be.
Each baby was special, but I found myself relaxing more and more with each one. (That probably explains the Birth Order Book-certain personality characteristics based on your order in a family-I read awhile back more than anything.)
By the third baby I'd gotten over so many of those neurotic mother worries. That meant I could stop getting up in the middle of the night to make sure she was still breathing. I could take her to Disneyland when she was only three months old and not freak out about the germs in the air on the plane, in the hotel room or at the amusement park. I didn't feel guilty when I finally put away the cloth diapers and put her in a disposal one. I no longer felt compelled to sterilize everything, and the five-second rule actually sounded a few seconds too short.
Not that I didn't cherish the time with the oldest, but I came to enjoy the overall experience more each time because I was less worried and more confident in following my own mommy instincts. Sure, I was still a worst-case-scenario thinker. I think that comes with being a writer. But I'm certain I would have dealt with and been affected by the second child's speech difficulties and the third child's heath issues differently had they happened with the first child.
I've found mothering to be a lot like writing. There's a steep learning curve with the first few books I wrote. You rely on writing craft books the way a new mother relies on baby books. I haven't stopped learning or developing as a writer, but the process becomes more organic with each manuscript. It doesn't become easier, but by no longer sweating every little detail or following so-called "rules," I've enjoyed the experience of writing subsequent books so much more.
My little one just ran into our bedroom. We wished her a Happy Birthday! She couldn't believe she was now four. Her words, "I got older when I slept?"
Happy Birthday, my beautiful Rose! You have been a true blessing and joy in my life.
Each baby was special, but I found myself relaxing more and more with each one. (That probably explains the Birth Order Book-certain personality characteristics based on your order in a family-I read awhile back more than anything.)
By the third baby I'd gotten over so many of those neurotic mother worries. That meant I could stop getting up in the middle of the night to make sure she was still breathing. I could take her to Disneyland when she was only three months old and not freak out about the germs in the air on the plane, in the hotel room or at the amusement park. I didn't feel guilty when I finally put away the cloth diapers and put her in a disposal one. I no longer felt compelled to sterilize everything, and the five-second rule actually sounded a few seconds too short.
Not that I didn't cherish the time with the oldest, but I came to enjoy the overall experience more each time because I was less worried and more confident in following my own mommy instincts. Sure, I was still a worst-case-scenario thinker. I think that comes with being a writer. But I'm certain I would have dealt with and been affected by the second child's speech difficulties and the third child's heath issues differently had they happened with the first child.
I've found mothering to be a lot like writing. There's a steep learning curve with the first few books I wrote. You rely on writing craft books the way a new mother relies on baby books. I haven't stopped learning or developing as a writer, but the process becomes more organic with each manuscript. It doesn't become easier, but by no longer sweating every little detail or following so-called "rules," I've enjoyed the experience of writing subsequent books so much more.
My little one just ran into our bedroom. We wished her a Happy Birthday! She couldn't believe she was now four. Her words, "I got older when I slept?"
Happy Birthday, my beautiful Rose! You have been a true blessing and joy in my life.
Friday, January 12, 2007
Hitting a wall
New pages written: 0 (goal: 6.2 pages per day)
Old pages revised on paper: 6 page scene that's still not working
Pages of revisions typed in: 0
Pages lost or gained due to revisions: 0
Total page count to date: 159 (goal: 200)
Days remaining until D-day: 19 days
Emails from editor in UK: 0
Emails from agent in NY: 0
Chocolate consumed: Mint chocolate chip ice cream
Junk food consumed: None.
Exercise: Walk with the kids in the snow
Television watched: The Office, United 93 DVD
Tears: A couple during movie
Link for the day: Mt. Hood Rescue Photos. Some interesting shots of what was going on up there in December taken by a member of Portland Mountain Rescue.
Not a lot to say about yesterday. No school. No Pilates. No pages. Though we had a blast playing in the snow.
Eldest kidlet wanted to make a snowman, but the other kids wanted to go for a walk so she decided to bring her snowball with her. At each house we passed, she rolled her ball in the snow. It kept getting bigger and bigger. Pretty soon, she couldn't carry it. Guess who got to do the honors? What's a mom for other than to lug a giant snowball around neighborhood!
Instead of writing last night, I decided to put on United 93, a compelling and I must admit, painful film to watch. Why was I watching a movie while on a deadline? Especially one that would bring back memories of that fateful day in September and of years spent working and flying the Friendly Skies?
Well, I was stuck on a scene that needed to be rewritten. What I was doing wasn't working. Even my brilliant critique partners comments weren't helping. I felt like I was banging my head against a wall. I needed to be pulled away/distracted from the book for a couple hours. United 93 did that.
This morning I woke up with a new way to approach the troublesome scene and I can't wait to get back to the book. Of course, it's still five hours until naptime when I'll have time to write!
Fat Cat Thief Goliath Update: If you saw my fun link yesterday, the cat's owner has claimed him. His real name is Hercules . He's been missing for months and is actually five pounds lighter than he'd been. Don't you just love happy endings?
Old pages revised on paper: 6 page scene that's still not working
Pages of revisions typed in: 0
Pages lost or gained due to revisions: 0
Total page count to date: 159 (goal: 200)
Days remaining until D-day: 19 days
Emails from editor in UK: 0
Emails from agent in NY: 0
Chocolate consumed: Mint chocolate chip ice cream
Junk food consumed: None.
Exercise: Walk with the kids in the snow
Television watched: The Office, United 93 DVD
Tears: A couple during movie
Link for the day: Mt. Hood Rescue Photos. Some interesting shots of what was going on up there in December taken by a member of Portland Mountain Rescue.
Not a lot to say about yesterday. No school. No Pilates. No pages. Though we had a blast playing in the snow.
Eldest kidlet wanted to make a snowman, but the other kids wanted to go for a walk so she decided to bring her snowball with her. At each house we passed, she rolled her ball in the snow. It kept getting bigger and bigger. Pretty soon, she couldn't carry it. Guess who got to do the honors? What's a mom for other than to lug a giant snowball around neighborhood!
Instead of writing last night, I decided to put on United 93, a compelling and I must admit, painful film to watch. Why was I watching a movie while on a deadline? Especially one that would bring back memories of that fateful day in September and of years spent working and flying the Friendly Skies?
Well, I was stuck on a scene that needed to be rewritten. What I was doing wasn't working. Even my brilliant critique partners comments weren't helping. I felt like I was banging my head against a wall. I needed to be pulled away/distracted from the book for a couple hours. United 93 did that.
This morning I woke up with a new way to approach the troublesome scene and I can't wait to get back to the book. Of course, it's still five hours until naptime when I'll have time to write!
Fat Cat Thief Goliath Update: If you saw my fun link yesterday, the cat's owner has claimed him. His real name is Hercules . He's been missing for months and is actually five pounds lighter than he'd been. Don't you just love happy endings?
Thursday, January 11, 2007
Update
The kidlets love snow. When we were driving up to sled on Mt. Hood, my son got all wide-eyed and said, "It looks just like Narnia."
This morning the kids ran into my bedroom. "Mommy, it's a Winter wonderland outside. It's so beautiful, you have to see."
Yes, it's pretty, but it's also icy so school was delayed by two hours. I just got a phone call. They've now cancelled school for the day.
That scream you may have just heard. That was me.
This morning the kids ran into my bedroom. "Mommy, it's a Winter wonderland outside. It's so beautiful, you have to see."
Yes, it's pretty, but it's also icy so school was delayed by two hours. I just got a phone call. They've now cancelled school for the day.
That scream you may have just heard. That was me.
Not much accomplished
New pages written: 0 (goal: 6.2 pages per day)
Old pages revised on paper: Chapter 5 on screen
Pages of revisions typed in: 0
Pages lost or gained due to revisions: 1
Total page count to date: 159 (goal: 200)
Days remaining until D-day: 20 days
Emails from editor in UK: 0
Emails from agent in NY: 0
Chocolate consumed: English toffee
Junk food consumed: Tillamook Cheeseburger, fries and Sprite (hubby brought home dinner since I wasn't feeling well.)
Exercise: Pilates homework
Television watched: None
Tears: Yes, when I heard the song Wherever You Will Go by The Calling. It's so perfect for the Christmas book I'll be writing this summer and really got the gears cranking. I downloaded it on iTunes! I now have two songs on that book's soundtrack.
Fun link for the day: The fat cat thief! If you like cats, even if you don't, check it out!
I'm not feeling that great and the kidlets have a two-hour late start due to the weather, so I'll make it short.
My productivity fell off sharply. I can't blame it on revisions. I never have time on Wednesdays to write. The day always looks the same.
Kidlet drop-off at 8. Kidlet drop-off at 9. Home for a few minutes. Eucharistic Adoration from 10-11. Home for a few minutes. Kidlet pickup at noon. Lunch in the car. Teach a class in NE Portland from 1 to 2. Kidlet pick up at 3. Home.
There was supposed to be a dance class, too, but due to the weather we chose not to make the drive to Portland tonight. I ended up taking a two-hour nap after dinner, instead. The kids tucked me into bed and kissed me goodnight after their showers. So sweet!
Plan for today: enjoy the morning with the kidlets who don't have school until 10, play with youngest since she doesn't have preschool, write during naptime if I don't sleep myself, Pilates and write while the kidlet are at dance tonight. If there's dance, since Portland schools cancelled school for the day!
What's your day look like?
Old pages revised on paper: Chapter 5 on screen
Pages of revisions typed in: 0
Pages lost or gained due to revisions: 1
Total page count to date: 159 (goal: 200)
Days remaining until D-day: 20 days
Emails from editor in UK: 0
Emails from agent in NY: 0
Chocolate consumed: English toffee
Junk food consumed: Tillamook Cheeseburger, fries and Sprite (hubby brought home dinner since I wasn't feeling well.)
Exercise: Pilates homework
Television watched: None
Tears: Yes, when I heard the song Wherever You Will Go by The Calling. It's so perfect for the Christmas book I'll be writing this summer and really got the gears cranking. I downloaded it on iTunes! I now have two songs on that book's soundtrack.
Fun link for the day: The fat cat thief! If you like cats, even if you don't, check it out!
I'm not feeling that great and the kidlets have a two-hour late start due to the weather, so I'll make it short.
My productivity fell off sharply. I can't blame it on revisions. I never have time on Wednesdays to write. The day always looks the same.
Kidlet drop-off at 8. Kidlet drop-off at 9. Home for a few minutes. Eucharistic Adoration from 10-11. Home for a few minutes. Kidlet pickup at noon. Lunch in the car. Teach a class in NE Portland from 1 to 2. Kidlet pick up at 3. Home.
There was supposed to be a dance class, too, but due to the weather we chose not to make the drive to Portland tonight. I ended up taking a two-hour nap after dinner, instead. The kids tucked me into bed and kissed me goodnight after their showers. So sweet!
Plan for today: enjoy the morning with the kidlets who don't have school until 10, play with youngest since she doesn't have preschool, write during naptime if I don't sleep myself, Pilates and write while the kidlet are at dance tonight. If there's dance, since Portland schools cancelled school for the day!
What's your day look like?
Wednesday, January 10, 2007
Good news, bad news
New pages written: 0 (goal: 6.2 pages per day)
Old pages revised on paper: chapters 1-4 on screen
Pages of revisions typed in: 0
Pages lost or gained due to revisions: +2
Total page count to date: 158 (goal: 200)
Days remaining until D-day: 22 days
Emails from editor in UK: 0
Emails from agent in NY: 0
Chocolate consumed: English toffee from a candy store in LA's Farmer Market
Junk food consumed: Grande non-fat vanilla steamer from Starbucks, pizza
Exercise: Pilates homework
Television watched: None
Tears: None.
Fun link for the day: For Hayden fans! How would you like to wake up to him bringing you Starbuck's in the morning?
Tuesday was one of those good news, bad news days.
First, I had a nice visit with my friend in Lake Oswego who gave me the yummiest English Toffee to take home. Toffee is my fave candy. I have to force myself to stay away from Sees' Candies every time I'm at the mall due to my addiction to their Victoria Toffee. It's just too tasty. The toffee today was comparable. Maybe even a tad better. I'd need to do a side-by-side taste comparison to know for sure. I'm tempted, but the scale is finally moving in the right direction and I'm not ready to negate that with a toffee binge.
When I got home, the first five chapters of Last Man On Earth were back from my critique partner with her comments.
The good news? She could tell it wasn't a first draft and the writing is solid. So yeah! That cuts out a lot of work when I go back through.
The bad news? She wanted me to go deepen the emotion and character development in Chapters 4 and 5. Deepen a lot. Many, many pages of deepening.
I panicked. How was I going to do this? What should I do? How deep should I go? Should I finish the complete first or do this? Eating a piece of toffee helped calm me down a little. At least until the sugar kicked in. Then I got to work.
I rewrote a passage she said was really all about the race and had nothing going on with the characters, etc. I reread what I'd written. And reread. Still feeling panicked and now clueles, I pasted the passage into an email addressed to my critique partner. The subject line was brief and to the point, "Better?"
We usually don't resend revised work to one another, unless 1) we're on a really tight dealine or 2) wigging out. Since I qualified for both, I hit send without a moment of hesitation. I wanted (okay, needed) to know I was on the right track.
I got this reply: This is great. Yes. They're confiding in one another, he's noticing details. The tie to the past is significant because it impacts the here and now AND he is challenging her to grow. Really good job!
Huge sigh of relief. On a roll, I forgot about adding any new pages for the day and started at the beginning of the book. I made it through the first four chapters until tiredness took over. (It's after midnight now.) After the rewrites, I only increased the page count by two pages, but the book is stronger now which is all that matters in the long run. I'll revise chapter five later today, then go through chapters six and seven before moving forward again.
One more bad news item... a snow storm has been forecasted to hit the Portland area sometime this morning. I love snow. Snow=skiing. At least it did before kidlets, but I'm hoping soon that will be true again. But for now, snow=no school. That means no writing for me. Something I can't really afford right now because not only do I have a deadline at the end of the month, but a ski trip planned. The skiing falls before the deadline so that means I have to be pretty much done with the book before I head down to stay with my friend at her place in Bend. Plus I promised her she could read the book so it must be done! Early. Yikes.
That means if it really is snowing when I wake up, I want it to snow enough that hubby has to stay home, too! That's the only way a snow day's going to work around here. Time for a snow dance!
Old pages revised on paper: chapters 1-4 on screen
Pages of revisions typed in: 0
Pages lost or gained due to revisions: +2
Total page count to date: 158 (goal: 200)
Days remaining until D-day: 22 days
Emails from editor in UK: 0
Emails from agent in NY: 0
Chocolate consumed: English toffee from a candy store in LA's Farmer Market
Junk food consumed: Grande non-fat vanilla steamer from Starbucks, pizza
Exercise: Pilates homework
Television watched: None
Tears: None.
Fun link for the day: For Hayden fans! How would you like to wake up to him bringing you Starbuck's in the morning?
Tuesday was one of those good news, bad news days.
First, I had a nice visit with my friend in Lake Oswego who gave me the yummiest English Toffee to take home. Toffee is my fave candy. I have to force myself to stay away from Sees' Candies every time I'm at the mall due to my addiction to their Victoria Toffee. It's just too tasty. The toffee today was comparable. Maybe even a tad better. I'd need to do a side-by-side taste comparison to know for sure. I'm tempted, but the scale is finally moving in the right direction and I'm not ready to negate that with a toffee binge.
When I got home, the first five chapters of Last Man On Earth were back from my critique partner with her comments.
The good news? She could tell it wasn't a first draft and the writing is solid. So yeah! That cuts out a lot of work when I go back through.
The bad news? She wanted me to go deepen the emotion and character development in Chapters 4 and 5. Deepen a lot. Many, many pages of deepening.
I panicked. How was I going to do this? What should I do? How deep should I go? Should I finish the complete first or do this? Eating a piece of toffee helped calm me down a little. At least until the sugar kicked in. Then I got to work.
I rewrote a passage she said was really all about the race and had nothing going on with the characters, etc. I reread what I'd written. And reread. Still feeling panicked and now clueles, I pasted the passage into an email addressed to my critique partner. The subject line was brief and to the point, "Better?"
We usually don't resend revised work to one another, unless 1) we're on a really tight dealine or 2) wigging out. Since I qualified for both, I hit send without a moment of hesitation. I wanted (okay, needed) to know I was on the right track.
I got this reply: This is great. Yes. They're confiding in one another, he's noticing details. The tie to the past is significant because it impacts the here and now AND he is challenging her to grow. Really good job!
Huge sigh of relief. On a roll, I forgot about adding any new pages for the day and started at the beginning of the book. I made it through the first four chapters until tiredness took over. (It's after midnight now.) After the rewrites, I only increased the page count by two pages, but the book is stronger now which is all that matters in the long run. I'll revise chapter five later today, then go through chapters six and seven before moving forward again.
One more bad news item... a snow storm has been forecasted to hit the Portland area sometime this morning. I love snow. Snow=skiing. At least it did before kidlets, but I'm hoping soon that will be true again. But for now, snow=no school. That means no writing for me. Something I can't really afford right now because not only do I have a deadline at the end of the month, but a ski trip planned. The skiing falls before the deadline so that means I have to be pretty much done with the book before I head down to stay with my friend at her place in Bend. Plus I promised her she could read the book so it must be done! Early. Yikes.
That means if it really is snowing when I wake up, I want it to snow enough that hubby has to stay home, too! That's the only way a snow day's going to work around here. Time for a snow dance!
Tuesday, January 09, 2007
Workout
New pages written: 6 (goal: 6.2 pages per day)
Old pages revised on paper: 14
Pages of revisions typed in: 14
Pages lost or gained due to revisions: 0
Total page count to date: 156 (goal: 200)
Days remaining until D-day: 24 days
Emails from editor in UK: 0
Emails from agent in NY: 0
Chocolate consumed: Another chunk of Toblerone
Junk food consumed: Tall non-fat vanilla steamer from Starbucks
Exercise: One hour of Pilates
Television watched: None
Tears: Yes, but friend-related, not writing-related.
Fun link for the day: For romance readers. A short story written by one of my fave Loveswept author's Debra Dixon.
I survived my first Pilates session yesterday. A little sore, but not as bad as I thought it would be. Most of the session was spent on the mechanics/technique, the how-to-do the various positions without hurting oneself. It's harder than it looks trying to get everything doing what it's suppose to: contract/release, inhale/exhale, head position, neck, etc. I felt like I should be taking notes. I did something called the Reformer machine, too. Cables provide resistance. I could really feel those exercises in my legs. My instructor even assigned homework to do before my next session on Thursday! I liked it enough that I scheduled five more sessions.
Last night, my six-year-old son received a call from a girl, who invited him over for a playdate. I guess they worked out all the details at school today and just needed to confirm with the moms. He's very excited. Of course, he didn't appreciate his older sister bursting out with the "…sitting in a tree K-I-S-S-I-N-G" song and teasing him about his "girlfriend." I don't even want to think about what it will be like when they actually start dating.
On the book front, it's coming along. They are in Seychelles. My shy heroine doesn't want to wear a bikini for the water challenge I still need to think up. I'm trying to figure out what the hero should tell her so she will wear it. A million dollar grand prize is at stake, and the other teams are nipping at their heels.
Any ideas on what he could say? Please post in the comment section, if you do. Thanks!
I'm visiting a friend this morning down in my old stomping ground in Lake Oswego and need to get going so I can be back in time to pick up the youngest kidlet from preschool. I'll write my pages during naptime and finish them up later tonight.
Have fun today!
Old pages revised on paper: 14
Pages of revisions typed in: 14
Pages lost or gained due to revisions: 0
Total page count to date: 156 (goal: 200)
Days remaining until D-day: 24 days
Emails from editor in UK: 0
Emails from agent in NY: 0
Chocolate consumed: Another chunk of Toblerone
Junk food consumed: Tall non-fat vanilla steamer from Starbucks
Exercise: One hour of Pilates
Television watched: None
Tears: Yes, but friend-related, not writing-related.
Fun link for the day: For romance readers. A short story written by one of my fave Loveswept author's Debra Dixon.
I survived my first Pilates session yesterday. A little sore, but not as bad as I thought it would be. Most of the session was spent on the mechanics/technique, the how-to-do the various positions without hurting oneself. It's harder than it looks trying to get everything doing what it's suppose to: contract/release, inhale/exhale, head position, neck, etc. I felt like I should be taking notes. I did something called the Reformer machine, too. Cables provide resistance. I could really feel those exercises in my legs. My instructor even assigned homework to do before my next session on Thursday! I liked it enough that I scheduled five more sessions.
Last night, my six-year-old son received a call from a girl, who invited him over for a playdate. I guess they worked out all the details at school today and just needed to confirm with the moms. He's very excited. Of course, he didn't appreciate his older sister bursting out with the "…sitting in a tree K-I-S-S-I-N-G" song and teasing him about his "girlfriend." I don't even want to think about what it will be like when they actually start dating.
On the book front, it's coming along. They are in Seychelles. My shy heroine doesn't want to wear a bikini for the water challenge I still need to think up. I'm trying to figure out what the hero should tell her so she will wear it. A million dollar grand prize is at stake, and the other teams are nipping at their heels.
Any ideas on what he could say? Please post in the comment section, if you do. Thanks!
I'm visiting a friend this morning down in my old stomping ground in Lake Oswego and need to get going so I can be back in time to pick up the youngest kidlet from preschool. I'll write my pages during naptime and finish them up later tonight.
Have fun today!
Monday, January 08, 2007
Three to go
New pages written: 15 (goal: 6.2 pages per day)
Old pages revised on paper: 0 but revised a lot on screen
Pages of revisions typed in: 0
Pages lost or gained due to revisions: 0
Total page count to date: 150 (goal: 200)
Days remaining until D-day: 23 days
Emails from editor in UK: 0
Emails from agent in NY: 0
Chocolate consumed: Chunk of chocolate
Junk food consumed: Cheesecake, wine, port after dinner on Saturday, Chips on Sunday
Exercise: Yes
Television watched: None
Tears: Yes, not book related. As expected, an uncle lost his battle with leukemia this weekend.
Fun link for the day: A blog I found discussing HEAs. The comments are interesting, too!
Not as many pages this weekend as I'd hoped, but I didn't want to skip the kidlets' swim meet on Saturday. I even brought my alphie so I could write in between their heats, but hubby had to work at the meet so I got Rose duty.
I'd hoped not to write on Sundays, but since I got little done on Saturday, I had no choice. I was so into the writing that around 3:30 pm, I realized hubby wasn't back with the kidlets even though he'd left at 10:30 am. (This is why I cannot write if I'm the only one home alone with the kids. I shut everything out and lose total track of time.) Worried, I called his cell. Turns out my mom had fixed them lunch and he was watching football with my dad. My sister and brother-in-law had shown up to watch the games, too.
He asked what I had for lunch. I said nothing. He asked if I had moved from the spot where he last saw me. I said yes. I'd taken a shower. I'd also had to get the phone. He told me to get something to eat and take a break. So I grabbed some chips (nothing else looked good) and went to Target to buy a pair of black sweat pants. Mine were looking pretty bad.
Unfortunately, I just can't go into Target for one thing. Tonight my impulse purchases consisted of two pairs of tights (both light brown, but one is fishnet style) to go with my brown Franco Sarto boots, Love Actually DVD, two T-shirts (white and hot pink), two sports bras and a new warm-up suit. At least most of those things were on sale.
I forced myself to walk past the book section without taking a peek. My TBR pile is about to fall over, but that's never stopped me before. This time, however, I had two good reasons--the deadline and the books I'll be judging for RWA's RITA contest will be here arriving soon. The RITA books have to be read before anything else.
But first I must finish the book. Three chapters (approx. 60 pages) left to write until I have a complete manuscript. That means I need to get writing. And I'll do that. Just as soon as I get back from my Pilates intro session! I sure hope it's not too hard.
Old pages revised on paper: 0 but revised a lot on screen
Pages of revisions typed in: 0
Pages lost or gained due to revisions: 0
Total page count to date: 150 (goal: 200)
Days remaining until D-day: 23 days
Emails from editor in UK: 0
Emails from agent in NY: 0
Chocolate consumed: Chunk of chocolate
Junk food consumed: Cheesecake, wine, port after dinner on Saturday, Chips on Sunday
Exercise: Yes
Television watched: None
Tears: Yes, not book related. As expected, an uncle lost his battle with leukemia this weekend.
Fun link for the day: A blog I found discussing HEAs. The comments are interesting, too!
Not as many pages this weekend as I'd hoped, but I didn't want to skip the kidlets' swim meet on Saturday. I even brought my alphie so I could write in between their heats, but hubby had to work at the meet so I got Rose duty.
I'd hoped not to write on Sundays, but since I got little done on Saturday, I had no choice. I was so into the writing that around 3:30 pm, I realized hubby wasn't back with the kidlets even though he'd left at 10:30 am. (This is why I cannot write if I'm the only one home alone with the kids. I shut everything out and lose total track of time.) Worried, I called his cell. Turns out my mom had fixed them lunch and he was watching football with my dad. My sister and brother-in-law had shown up to watch the games, too.
He asked what I had for lunch. I said nothing. He asked if I had moved from the spot where he last saw me. I said yes. I'd taken a shower. I'd also had to get the phone. He told me to get something to eat and take a break. So I grabbed some chips (nothing else looked good) and went to Target to buy a pair of black sweat pants. Mine were looking pretty bad.
Unfortunately, I just can't go into Target for one thing. Tonight my impulse purchases consisted of two pairs of tights (both light brown, but one is fishnet style) to go with my brown Franco Sarto boots, Love Actually DVD, two T-shirts (white and hot pink), two sports bras and a new warm-up suit. At least most of those things were on sale.
I forced myself to walk past the book section without taking a peek. My TBR pile is about to fall over, but that's never stopped me before. This time, however, I had two good reasons--the deadline and the books I'll be judging for RWA's RITA contest will be here arriving soon. The RITA books have to be read before anything else.
But first I must finish the book. Three chapters (approx. 60 pages) left to write until I have a complete manuscript. That means I need to get writing. And I'll do that. Just as soon as I get back from my Pilates intro session! I sure hope it's not too hard.
Sunday, January 07, 2007
Kids and pets
There's something I don't get about kids or cats. Offer them food, and they aren't interested in even tasting it. Put that same food on your own plate, and everyone wants a taste.
The other morning it was scrambled eggs. Hubby doesn't like them so I'm the only one who eats them. By the time I got around to my breakfast, the littlest one was hungry for her snack. She wasn't interested in the red peppers on the plate, but wanted a taste of the yellow stuff even though she'd never wanted to try them before. She loved the eggs. Couldn't get enough of them. That meant my breakfast consisted mainly of red peppers.
My gray cat, Spirit, is the same way. She only wants to eat what I'm eating. Forget whether or not it's food a cat should want to eat or not. Mommy's food = Spirit's food. She also likes to drink water from my glass, something hubby has a real problem with. We've finally gotten her to skip my glass and drink out of a saucepan we put on the hearth. Note "pan" not "bowl." I really don't think Spirit realizes she's a cat.
Good thing because the kidlets, in their quest for a dog, have decided that Spirit is now a dog. So what if for all biological purposes Spirit is in actuality a cat? They've now got the "dog" they've been dreaming about. Gotta give them points for going after what they wanted. Their "dog" barks (when she's unhappy about something she really does bark), meets us at the door when we come home, cries for attention, begs for table scraps and never leaves our sides when we're home. At least this "doggy" uses a liter box. Hubby's very pleased about the turn of events!
I love my cats, but I still want a dog. When I was younger I wanted a wolf-hybrid so bad. I imagined us hiking through the woods, skiing, going on all sorts of adventures together. Today I saw a post about someone who was giving a wolf-hybrid away. It was the cutest thing you've ever seen. When I mentioned it to hubby he stared at me as if I'd lost my mind. I told him I didn't ask him if we could have the dog, I just wanted to tell him about it. He fell back on his standard line, "If we're going to get a puppy, we might as well have another baby."
You see, the first time I asked if we could get a dog was just after we'd moved to Oregon from the SF Bay Area. We'd purchased a cute little cottage in the heart of Lake Oswego and I was ready to add something furry and cuddly to our family of two. Hubby said we weren't ready for a dog so we got our two furbabies Rocket and Spirit instead. Of course, a couple of week later I found out I was pregnant with the eldest kidlet. All I could think is he doesn't think we can handle a dog, but we're having a baby???
Anyway getting a pup is on hold for now. Probably a good thing with all the deadlines.
Speaking of which, the kidlets spent the night at my parents' house so we could attend our church's Epiphany dinner and auction. That meant sleeping in late this morning! Since I'm kid free for a few more hours, I better get working on the book.
Hope you're having a fun weekend!
The other morning it was scrambled eggs. Hubby doesn't like them so I'm the only one who eats them. By the time I got around to my breakfast, the littlest one was hungry for her snack. She wasn't interested in the red peppers on the plate, but wanted a taste of the yellow stuff even though she'd never wanted to try them before. She loved the eggs. Couldn't get enough of them. That meant my breakfast consisted mainly of red peppers.
My gray cat, Spirit, is the same way. She only wants to eat what I'm eating. Forget whether or not it's food a cat should want to eat or not. Mommy's food = Spirit's food. She also likes to drink water from my glass, something hubby has a real problem with. We've finally gotten her to skip my glass and drink out of a saucepan we put on the hearth. Note "pan" not "bowl." I really don't think Spirit realizes she's a cat.
Good thing because the kidlets, in their quest for a dog, have decided that Spirit is now a dog. So what if for all biological purposes Spirit is in actuality a cat? They've now got the "dog" they've been dreaming about. Gotta give them points for going after what they wanted. Their "dog" barks (when she's unhappy about something she really does bark), meets us at the door when we come home, cries for attention, begs for table scraps and never leaves our sides when we're home. At least this "doggy" uses a liter box. Hubby's very pleased about the turn of events!
I love my cats, but I still want a dog. When I was younger I wanted a wolf-hybrid so bad. I imagined us hiking through the woods, skiing, going on all sorts of adventures together. Today I saw a post about someone who was giving a wolf-hybrid away. It was the cutest thing you've ever seen. When I mentioned it to hubby he stared at me as if I'd lost my mind. I told him I didn't ask him if we could have the dog, I just wanted to tell him about it. He fell back on his standard line, "If we're going to get a puppy, we might as well have another baby."
You see, the first time I asked if we could get a dog was just after we'd moved to Oregon from the SF Bay Area. We'd purchased a cute little cottage in the heart of Lake Oswego and I was ready to add something furry and cuddly to our family of two. Hubby said we weren't ready for a dog so we got our two furbabies Rocket and Spirit instead. Of course, a couple of week later I found out I was pregnant with the eldest kidlet. All I could think is he doesn't think we can handle a dog, but we're having a baby???
Anyway getting a pup is on hold for now. Probably a good thing with all the deadlines.
Speaking of which, the kidlets spent the night at my parents' house so we could attend our church's Epiphany dinner and auction. That meant sleeping in late this morning! Since I'm kid free for a few more hours, I better get working on the book.
Hope you're having a fun weekend!
Saturday, January 06, 2007
We saw a star in the east...
Today marks Epiphany, the feast celebrating the Wise men's visit to Jesus. The kidlets are excited because the final three gifts under the Christmas tree can be opened today. We always save three gifts from Christmas day until Epiphany to represent the three gifts given to Jesus by the Magi. We also start taking down our Christmas tree and decorations. Do you have any special holiday traditions?
Friday night was the kick-off for a three-day Epiphany elebration at our church. Each religious education class performed a part of the Nativity story. The show had all those funny moments you hear about with Christmas pageants with kids' forgetting their lines, Mary not coming out when the angel appeared, out of order scenes and singing so quietly no one could hear them. "It's a lot like herding cats," our priest said when talking about putting on a show with a bunch of kids.
The oldest kidlet's class performed the Annunciation. The middle kidlet's class put on the Nativity scene. He got to be Joseph and was so excited. He wore a cool costume, though I must admit his headband was more reminiscent of Mike Reno, lead singer of Loverboy, than a carpenter from Nazareth. Still he looked really cute. The youngest was too little to participate, but she got lots of attention because of her black eye.
As for the book, I wrote but I'm not posting tallies on weekends. I left my characters in Johannesburg, South Africa. I can't wait to get them to Cape Town. Things are heating up, though neither wants to think of the other as anything but their teammate! It's going to be so much fun to write.
Friday night was the kick-off for a three-day Epiphany elebration at our church. Each religious education class performed a part of the Nativity story. The show had all those funny moments you hear about with Christmas pageants with kids' forgetting their lines, Mary not coming out when the angel appeared, out of order scenes and singing so quietly no one could hear them. "It's a lot like herding cats," our priest said when talking about putting on a show with a bunch of kids.
The oldest kidlet's class performed the Annunciation. The middle kidlet's class put on the Nativity scene. He got to be Joseph and was so excited. He wore a cool costume, though I must admit his headband was more reminiscent of Mike Reno, lead singer of Loverboy, than a carpenter from Nazareth. Still he looked really cute. The youngest was too little to participate, but she got lots of attention because of her black eye.
As for the book, I wrote but I'm not posting tallies on weekends. I left my characters in Johannesburg, South Africa. I can't wait to get them to Cape Town. Things are heating up, though neither wants to think of the other as anything but their teammate! It's going to be so much fun to write.
Friday, January 05, 2007
Ready for the big push
New pages written: 6 (goal: 6.2 pages per day)
Old pages revised on paper: 0
Pages of revisions typed in: 0
Pages lost or gained due to revisions: 0
Total page count to date: 135 (goal: 200)
Days remaining until D-day: 26 days
Emails from editor in UK: 0
Emails from agent in NY: 0
Chocolate consumed: peppermint bark
Junk food consumed: Vente non-fat vanilla steamer at Starbucks
Exercise: Yes! Total Body Toning Workout with hand weights. Short, but sweet!
Television watched: Exercise TV and the last 10 minutes of The Office. I forgot it was back on.
Tears: none
Fun link for the day: For romance writers and readers!
I managed pages each day this week, but not enough. I need to crank up the productivity and produce pages. Lots and lots of pages to keep the panic at bay. We've got a ski trip planned for the end of the month. Last year due to a sick kidlet, I didn't get to ski. I don't want to have to stay off the slopes this year again. Enough about the book...
I did it! I phoned the Pilates studio and will be taking a one-hour intro session on Monday morning. The time works perfectly with preschool, too. Even though that is my prime writing time, I need to do this for me.
I don't think I mentioned that the youngest kidlet woke up with a black eye on Wednesday. It's so nasty looking I screamed when I first saw it. Totally purple and swollen. My poor baby. We've been getting some funny looks from people when we're out. Even our priest asked her about it after morning Mass. I think she must have run into a door or the staircase railing when she went to the bathroom in the middle of the night. I'm surprised she didn't scream her head off though. It looks like she must have hit hard.
I've been debating whether to take her to the doctor or not. I asked if her eye hurt. She said only when she touches it. Anybody want to guess what I said to her?
Old pages revised on paper: 0
Pages of revisions typed in: 0
Pages lost or gained due to revisions: 0
Total page count to date: 135 (goal: 200)
Days remaining until D-day: 26 days
Emails from editor in UK: 0
Emails from agent in NY: 0
Chocolate consumed: peppermint bark
Junk food consumed: Vente non-fat vanilla steamer at Starbucks
Exercise: Yes! Total Body Toning Workout with hand weights. Short, but sweet!
Television watched: Exercise TV and the last 10 minutes of The Office. I forgot it was back on.
Tears: none
Fun link for the day: For romance writers and readers!
I managed pages each day this week, but not enough. I need to crank up the productivity and produce pages. Lots and lots of pages to keep the panic at bay. We've got a ski trip planned for the end of the month. Last year due to a sick kidlet, I didn't get to ski. I don't want to have to stay off the slopes this year again. Enough about the book...
I did it! I phoned the Pilates studio and will be taking a one-hour intro session on Monday morning. The time works perfectly with preschool, too. Even though that is my prime writing time, I need to do this for me.
I don't think I mentioned that the youngest kidlet woke up with a black eye on Wednesday. It's so nasty looking I screamed when I first saw it. Totally purple and swollen. My poor baby. We've been getting some funny looks from people when we're out. Even our priest asked her about it after morning Mass. I think she must have run into a door or the staircase railing when she went to the bathroom in the middle of the night. I'm surprised she didn't scream her head off though. It looks like she must have hit hard.
I've been debating whether to take her to the doctor or not. I asked if her eye hurt. She said only when she touches it. Anybody want to guess what I said to her?
Thursday, January 04, 2007
Almost!
New pages written: 5 (goal: 6.2 pages per day)
Old pages revised on paper: 0
Pages of revisions typed in: 0
Pages lost or gained due to revisions: 0
Total page count to date: 129 (goal: 200)
Days remaining until D-day: 27 days
Emails from editor in UK: 1 - see below
Emails from agent in NY: 1 - reply to my update on Book #3
Chocolate consumed: peppermint bark and ice cream
Junk food consumed: none
Exercise: none, but I got the number of a Pilates studio.
Television watched: none
Tears: none
Fun link for the day: Even non-Star Wars fans might like this one! Vegetable and fruit lovers for sure!
I almost made my page goal for Wednesday. A first so I'm calling the day a total success! Woeful Wednesday actually turned into wonderful Wednesday this morning when I received an email from my editor.
Right before Christmas, I sent her an idea for Book #3, the blind book they'd purchased along with Last Man on Earth. It was one of those ideas that just came and those kind are true gifts. The best part about this one is that my editor likes it. She actually called it a "cracking idea." I'm guessing (hoping) that means a good idea if you live in London. So I now know the story I'll be writing this summer. And it's a Christmas book, too!
Someone else I know got really good news too. Michelle Willingham sold two more historical romance novels to Harlequin! Yippee! Michelle and I have the same fabulous editor.
Old pages revised on paper: 0
Pages of revisions typed in: 0
Pages lost or gained due to revisions: 0
Total page count to date: 129 (goal: 200)
Days remaining until D-day: 27 days
Emails from editor in UK: 1 - see below
Emails from agent in NY: 1 - reply to my update on Book #3
Chocolate consumed: peppermint bark and ice cream
Junk food consumed: none
Exercise: none, but I got the number of a Pilates studio.
Television watched: none
Tears: none
Fun link for the day: Even non-Star Wars fans might like this one! Vegetable and fruit lovers for sure!
I almost made my page goal for Wednesday. A first so I'm calling the day a total success! Woeful Wednesday actually turned into wonderful Wednesday this morning when I received an email from my editor.
Right before Christmas, I sent her an idea for Book #3, the blind book they'd purchased along with Last Man on Earth. It was one of those ideas that just came and those kind are true gifts. The best part about this one is that my editor likes it. She actually called it a "cracking idea." I'm guessing (hoping) that means a good idea if you live in London. So I now know the story I'll be writing this summer. And it's a Christmas book, too!
Someone else I know got really good news too. Michelle Willingham sold two more historical romance novels to Harlequin! Yippee! Michelle and I have the same fabulous editor.
Wednesday, January 03, 2007
Woeful Wednesday
New pages written: 8 (goal: 6.2 pages per day)
Old pages revised on paper: 0
Pages of revisions typed in: 0
Pages lost or gained due to revisions: 0
Total page count to date: 124 (goal: 200)
Days remaining until D-day: 28 days
Emails from editor in UK: 0
Emails from agent in NY: 0
Chocolate consumed: m&ms
Junk food consumed: none
Exercise: none, but I thought about it. Progress!
Television watched: none
Tears: none
Fun link for the day: For any writer out there!
I took advantage of the kidlets going back to school on Tuesday and descended into the cave to write. Hubby picked up they youngest from preschool, fed her (and me) and put her down for her nap so I didn't even have to come out.
I finished the day with eight not-so-rough pages, including a first kiss and a tango dance. I could handle writing the kiss, but the dance took a little help from google.
Did you know the tango is really about improvisation, not the steps? Did you know there is more than one type of tango? (I'm writing about the Argentine Tango since my characters are in Buenos Aires) Did you also know the tango is the vertical expression of a horizontal desire? I knew none of these things. And I've even had tango lessons.
Back in college, my buddy Chris and I took a ballroom dancing class. Once we learned all the dances, we went to one of the ritzy hotels in San Francisco to try out our new dance skills. It was so much fun to dress up and dance like that, and I'm not sure why we stopped. Probably because Chris graduated and went to med school!
Anyway, Tuesday was a very productive writing day, and I was even in bed before eleven o'clock. I'm just worried about today. Wednesdays are always so busy, and it's a struggle to find a moment to myself let alone write a word. But I want to make my goal somehow. Even if it means staying up late.
Wish me luck please! I'm going to need it.
Old pages revised on paper: 0
Pages of revisions typed in: 0
Pages lost or gained due to revisions: 0
Total page count to date: 124 (goal: 200)
Days remaining until D-day: 28 days
Emails from editor in UK: 0
Emails from agent in NY: 0
Chocolate consumed: m&ms
Junk food consumed: none
Exercise: none, but I thought about it. Progress!
Television watched: none
Tears: none
Fun link for the day: For any writer out there!
I took advantage of the kidlets going back to school on Tuesday and descended into the cave to write. Hubby picked up they youngest from preschool, fed her (and me) and put her down for her nap so I didn't even have to come out.
I finished the day with eight not-so-rough pages, including a first kiss and a tango dance. I could handle writing the kiss, but the dance took a little help from google.
Did you know the tango is really about improvisation, not the steps? Did you know there is more than one type of tango? (I'm writing about the Argentine Tango since my characters are in Buenos Aires) Did you also know the tango is the vertical expression of a horizontal desire? I knew none of these things. And I've even had tango lessons.
Back in college, my buddy Chris and I took a ballroom dancing class. Once we learned all the dances, we went to one of the ritzy hotels in San Francisco to try out our new dance skills. It was so much fun to dress up and dance like that, and I'm not sure why we stopped. Probably because Chris graduated and went to med school!
Anyway, Tuesday was a very productive writing day, and I was even in bed before eleven o'clock. I'm just worried about today. Wednesdays are always so busy, and it's a struggle to find a moment to myself let alone write a word. But I want to make my goal somehow. Even if it means staying up late.
Wish me luck please! I'm going to need it.
Tuesday, January 02, 2007
Catch-up Tally
New pages written: 21 (goal: 6.2 pages per day)
Old pages revised on paper: 0
Pages of revisions typed in: 0
Pages lost or gained due to revisions: 0
Total page count to date: 116 (goal: 200)
Days remaining until D-day: 29 days
Emails from editor in UK: 0
Emails from agent in NY: 0
Chocolate consumed: A piece of chocolate birthday cake
Junk food consumed: none unless you count a glass of red wine with dinner
Exercise: none
Television watched: none (though hubby OD'd on an Everest: Beyond the Limits marathon)
Tears: none (though I got a choked up when we were going around the dinner table with our prayer petitions and my three year old prayed for the two climbers on Mt. Hood. She asked that they come down from the mountain safe.)
Fun link for the day: This is a new addition to the daily tally. Sometimes the link will be serious, other times silly. Check this out!
I think I've mentioned my writing process before. I usually write the first three chapters, then the last chapter. With this book, however, I tried something different. I wrote the first five chapters (struggling immensely with chapters four and five.) Instead of moving on to chapter six, I spent the last two days working on the last chapter. I roughed it out on Sunday night. Monday morning, I started revising and suddenly, things clicked and words started flowing. The conflicts became clarified. I knew exactly where I needed to take these people. Guess I should stick with my original process the next time!
On Sunday afternoon I reworked my synopsis for book two, current working title is The Wedding Dress and Mr. Wrong. I came up with a way to strand the hero and heroine in the wilderness without requiring (I hope) a suspension of disbelief from the reader! Of course I'm stuck on the black moment and resolution. It's just not there yet. Unfortunately that means I need to reexamine the internal conflicts.
It's only taken me ten (maybe it's eleven) sold books to realize if I'm stuck, I took a wrong turn somewhere. The tricky part is figuring out where I made the mistake: character, plot, conflict, motivation, fill-in-the-blank-here. But knowing where the block comes from has been a huge step forward for me as a writer. Plus it cuts down on the chocolate consumption. Melissa + writer's block = chocolate.
One more thing I need to add...
In keeping with one of my New Year's resolutions, I wanted to email a friend today but couldn't find his address since my aol imploded along with my address book a while back. I know he reads the blog occasionally so I'm doing it here.
Happy Birthday, JK! I hope it's a great one! xoxox
Old pages revised on paper: 0
Pages of revisions typed in: 0
Pages lost or gained due to revisions: 0
Total page count to date: 116 (goal: 200)
Days remaining until D-day: 29 days
Emails from editor in UK: 0
Emails from agent in NY: 0
Chocolate consumed: A piece of chocolate birthday cake
Junk food consumed: none unless you count a glass of red wine with dinner
Exercise: none
Television watched: none (though hubby OD'd on an Everest: Beyond the Limits marathon)
Tears: none (though I got a choked up when we were going around the dinner table with our prayer petitions and my three year old prayed for the two climbers on Mt. Hood. She asked that they come down from the mountain safe.)
Fun link for the day: This is a new addition to the daily tally. Sometimes the link will be serious, other times silly. Check this out!
I think I've mentioned my writing process before. I usually write the first three chapters, then the last chapter. With this book, however, I tried something different. I wrote the first five chapters (struggling immensely with chapters four and five.) Instead of moving on to chapter six, I spent the last two days working on the last chapter. I roughed it out on Sunday night. Monday morning, I started revising and suddenly, things clicked and words started flowing. The conflicts became clarified. I knew exactly where I needed to take these people. Guess I should stick with my original process the next time!
On Sunday afternoon I reworked my synopsis for book two, current working title is The Wedding Dress and Mr. Wrong. I came up with a way to strand the hero and heroine in the wilderness without requiring (I hope) a suspension of disbelief from the reader! Of course I'm stuck on the black moment and resolution. It's just not there yet. Unfortunately that means I need to reexamine the internal conflicts.
It's only taken me ten (maybe it's eleven) sold books to realize if I'm stuck, I took a wrong turn somewhere. The tricky part is figuring out where I made the mistake: character, plot, conflict, motivation, fill-in-the-blank-here. But knowing where the block comes from has been a huge step forward for me as a writer. Plus it cuts down on the chocolate consumption. Melissa + writer's block = chocolate.
One more thing I need to add...
In keeping with one of my New Year's resolutions, I wanted to email a friend today but couldn't find his address since my aol imploded along with my address book a while back. I know he reads the blog occasionally so I'm doing it here.
Happy Birthday, JK! I hope it's a great one! xoxox
Monday, January 01, 2007
Happy New Year!
We had a great time at Zoolights last night. A great way to say goodbye to 2006 and hello to 2007! Of course a new year means new resolutions. I went back to the archives. Here's what I wrote exactly one year ago today:
2006 New Year's resolutions:
1) Write everyday
2) Exercise regularly
3) Lose weight
4) Keep in better touch with friends
5) Be more patient with kids
How did I do? I wrote everyday though not always on a book which I'm assuming was my intention. I did great exercising, once I got around to it summer until I did something to my knee while walking hills. I lost weight for my college reunion only to gain most (but not all thankfully!) back. I did better than I had in the past keeping in touch with friends, but that's not saying much. I actually was more patient with the kidlets this year. So yay! Not all the resolutions were a total loss.
Here are my 2007 New Year's resolutions:
1) Write everyday on a story (blogging and email do not count!)
2) Finish my non-category novel by the end of the year (this is the story I worked on during NaNoWriMo)
3) Exercise three times a week (need a set number of times so I actually do it!)
4) Lose 15 pounds (being more specific should help me!)
5) Keep in better touch with friends (this one should always be there, IMHO)
6) Be even more patient with kidlets (a good one to have again with all the deadlines I'm facing this year) and the hubby (I'm adding him this year due to all the deadline dementia coming up.)
What are your New Year's resolutions?
2006 New Year's resolutions:
1) Write everyday
2) Exercise regularly
3) Lose weight
4) Keep in better touch with friends
5) Be more patient with kids
How did I do? I wrote everyday though not always on a book which I'm assuming was my intention. I did great exercising, once I got around to it summer until I did something to my knee while walking hills. I lost weight for my college reunion only to gain most (but not all thankfully!) back. I did better than I had in the past keeping in touch with friends, but that's not saying much. I actually was more patient with the kidlets this year. So yay! Not all the resolutions were a total loss.
Here are my 2007 New Year's resolutions:
1) Write everyday on a story (blogging and email do not count!)
2) Finish my non-category novel by the end of the year (this is the story I worked on during NaNoWriMo)
3) Exercise three times a week (need a set number of times so I actually do it!)
4) Lose 15 pounds (being more specific should help me!)
5) Keep in better touch with friends (this one should always be there, IMHO)
6) Be even more patient with kidlets (a good one to have again with all the deadlines I'm facing this year) and the hubby (I'm adding him this year due to all the deadline dementia coming up.)
What are your New Year's resolutions?
Sunday, December 31, 2006
New Year's Eve
We don't have any real big plans for New Year's Eve. Earlier in the evening, we'll be heading across the Columbia River and taking the kidlets to see Zoolights at the Oregon Zoo in Portland. It's the final night and something we've been meaning to do especially since we missed it last year.
Yesterday was hubby's birthday and we had a busy day. Here's a recap, especially for hubby's brother in So. Cal, who knew more about hubby's birthday than he did due to reading this blog!
The baptismal was lovely followed by a yummy luncheon. Everyone including the priest wished hubby a happy birthday. The kidlets hated to leave. Where else could they find approximately 30 other kids to play with at one time? I was amazed the family could not only pull something like this together right after Christmas with a week year old baby (and nine other children ages 16 years to 15 months), but invite and feed over 50 people in a spotless house. Only in my dreams could I manage something like that!
We ate dinner at a German restuarant in NE Portland called The Rhinelander. The Bavarian decor is charming. Accordian players stroll around entertaining diners with songs and they take requests. The food is tasty and the servings large. Cheese fondue is included with each meal. There's no way you can walk out hungry. Here's a picture of hubby with The Rhinelander's executive chef.
Our charming waitress serenaded hubby with a song Elvis Presley wrote when he was stationed in Germany. She sang the lyrics in both German and English, not only feeding him a bite of apple struedel but dabbing a spot of whipped cream on his nose.
After dinner, we drove a few blocks east and went to The Grotto, a beautiful sanctuary dedicated to the Sorrowful Mother that is taken care of by Servite friars. Each year, the Grotto puts on a Festival of Lights. One of the highlights is beautiful life-size Nativity scene that was carved in Italy.
In addition to all the lights strung around the grounds, there is a petting zoo with bunnies, sheep, goats, a miniature pony, donkey and llama. The kidlets loved the puppet show about the Christmas Donkey. There are also carolers, biblical-time reenactments and concerts in the Chapel of Mary. The Grotto is a wonderful place to visit no matter what time of year you're in Portland.
After the Grotto we drove through Peacock Lane, a street with charming gabled houses decorated with lights, figures, you name it. And then it was home for cake!
Hope everyone has fun celebrating tonight! I still have pages to write so that's what I'll be doing later. Though I will take a break for a glass of bubbly and a kiss when the clock strikes midnight!
Yesterday was hubby's birthday and we had a busy day. Here's a recap, especially for hubby's brother in So. Cal, who knew more about hubby's birthday than he did due to reading this blog!
The baptismal was lovely followed by a yummy luncheon. Everyone including the priest wished hubby a happy birthday. The kidlets hated to leave. Where else could they find approximately 30 other kids to play with at one time? I was amazed the family could not only pull something like this together right after Christmas with a week year old baby (and nine other children ages 16 years to 15 months), but invite and feed over 50 people in a spotless house. Only in my dreams could I manage something like that!
Our charming waitress serenaded hubby with a song Elvis Presley wrote when he was stationed in Germany. She sang the lyrics in both German and English, not only feeding him a bite of apple struedel but dabbing a spot of whipped cream on his nose.
After the Grotto we drove through Peacock Lane, a street with charming gabled houses decorated with lights, figures, you name it. And then it was home for cake!
Hope everyone has fun celebrating tonight! I still have pages to write so that's what I'll be doing later. Though I will take a break for a glass of bubbly and a kiss when the clock strikes midnight!
Saturday, December 30, 2006
Hubby's Day
Today is my hubby's birthday. Our plans for the day changed when we were invited to our friends' new baby's baptism today. We didn't want to miss that. Besides winter just started. There will be plenty of time for snowshoeing in the coming weeks. So all of us, including Tom's youngest brother, will be going out to dinner tonight instead.
Last night, the girls made cards and I baked a chocolate cake. This morning we'll have waffles, sausage and Krispy Kreme donuts. And best of all, hubby wants to do something with the kids after the baptism so I can write. Yes, I married the most wonderful man!
Have a great day!
Last night, the girls made cards and I baked a chocolate cake. This morning we'll have waffles, sausage and Krispy Kreme donuts. And best of all, hubby wants to do something with the kids after the baptism so I can write. Yes, I married the most wonderful man!
Have a great day!
Friday, December 29, 2006
Friday Fun
So I'm taking a break from my book to blog. I've been working on a scene that's required lots of googling and that's been taking a lot of time. Not that I mind. Research is one of my favorite things to do.
In this case, I had to figure out how to get my characters from Guatemala City to El Calafate, Argentina. For anyone interested: Guatemala City to Panama City to Buenos Aires to El Calafate. There are also routes through Houston, DFW, Miami, San Jose and Lima.
Doing that research I learned why teams on The Amazing Race always catch up to one another. It's not just too keep things competitive (though I'm sure that plays a large part), but that most of the flights to a certain locale depart around the same time. But I got my characters there (all seven teams to be exact.)
My hero, Jace, and heroine, Millie, are currently standing on the Perito Moreno Glacier in Patagonia/Argentina. She's not feeling too comfortable standing on a chunk of ice with pieces of the glacier creaking and crashing into the lake. I've never worn crampons myself and walked on a glacier, but I'm guessing one not used to doing so could feel a wee bit nervous. Anyone know for sure?
I also need to figure out how easy it is to slip/stumble while wearing crampons. Sure would be nice for the hero to catch the heroine and then hold her hand as the trek to the clue box to receive their next instruction. Although the cold weather would be perfect for a kiss, I think it's too soon still. Since I write sweet/traditional romances (i.e. no sex unless married) the longer I can stretch out that first kiss from happening, the better. Especially since these two already know each other and have kissed before the book started. I'm afraid once they start, there will be no stopping them. Oh, wait. That's what conflict is for!
Okay, back to the glacier! I can always fill in the details later, but I want to get this scene roughed out. Hubby and boy kidlet are off to a Blazer game tonight, so it's just going to be us girls at home which will mean no writing until after bedtime.
In this case, I had to figure out how to get my characters from Guatemala City to El Calafate, Argentina. For anyone interested: Guatemala City to Panama City to Buenos Aires to El Calafate. There are also routes through Houston, DFW, Miami, San Jose and Lima.
Doing that research I learned why teams on The Amazing Race always catch up to one another. It's not just too keep things competitive (though I'm sure that plays a large part), but that most of the flights to a certain locale depart around the same time. But I got my characters there (all seven teams to be exact.)
My hero, Jace, and heroine, Millie, are currently standing on the Perito Moreno Glacier in Patagonia/Argentina. She's not feeling too comfortable standing on a chunk of ice with pieces of the glacier creaking and crashing into the lake. I've never worn crampons myself and walked on a glacier, but I'm guessing one not used to doing so could feel a wee bit nervous. Anyone know for sure?
I also need to figure out how easy it is to slip/stumble while wearing crampons. Sure would be nice for the hero to catch the heroine and then hold her hand as the trek to the clue box to receive their next instruction. Although the cold weather would be perfect for a kiss, I think it's too soon still. Since I write sweet/traditional romances (i.e. no sex unless married) the longer I can stretch out that first kiss from happening, the better. Especially since these two already know each other and have kissed before the book started. I'm afraid once they start, there will be no stopping them. Oh, wait. That's what conflict is for!
Okay, back to the glacier! I can always fill in the details later, but I want to get this scene roughed out. Hubby and boy kidlet are off to a Blazer game tonight, so it's just going to be us girls at home which will mean no writing until after bedtime.
Thursday, December 28, 2006
Sledding and swimming
I'm back! We ended up spending the night at a place called Kahneeta that had hot springs mineral pools. Quite a nice treat after a chilly day on Mt. Hood. I even got writing done!!!!
Here's a trip report:
We arrived at Snow Bunny Sno-park on Mt. Hood around eleven. The drive took us longer than we expected due to having to put chains on. Highway 26 was a sheet of ice. The temperature was a cool 28 degrees with snow falling from the gray sky. A brisk wind blew, making it feel colder than it really was, but the four inches or so of fresh powder on the sled hill more than made up for it.
Very few people were there when we arrived. The kids (ours and another family who joined us) couldn't get enough sledding. Well, all the kids except our youngest. The wind and the snow hitting her face were a bit much. I dragged her all over the sno-park in her little baby-boggin, but that only made things worse. She hated the cold, the snow, the sled, everything. She said she wanted to go home. Now. And she never, ever wanted to go skiing.
I handed her over to hubby so I could sled a time or two. He took her down the hill, too. But she was so miserable I finally took her back to the minivan. Once inside she was back to her normally happy self. She ended up falling asleep, and I spent the next two hours in the front seat working on the book.
Her reaction was a one-eighty from our sledding trips last year. I know the weather was the biggest factor, but I also realized that my dream of having all five of us on skis this season wasn't going to happen. She's just not ready even though she'll be four in a couple of weeks and old enough for ski school. Picture me totally bummed.
As hubby and the kidlets continued sledding, the parking lot got really crowded and so did the hill. At one point the kidlets moved to a smaller hill and were rolling down sans sled. Luckily we only had one instance of blood (lip) and somehow the same kidlet ended up with scratches under his left eye. He has no idea how he did that, but I'm sure the many face plants had something to do with it.
Instead of going home after sledding, we followed our friends to Kah-nee-ta where hubby had booked us a room for the night. Kahneeta is a resort near Warm Springs. As soon as Rose saw the pool, she perked up. The warm mineral water was a perfect escape from the 38 degree temperature.
The pool was perfect for the kidlets with a shallow end where even the littlest one could touch bottom and go on a small slide by herself, a deep end with lap lanes for me and a huge slide for hubby and the other two kids. No one wanted to get out, but we had dinner reservations. All of us crashed by nine-thirty.
After breakfast, I stayed in the room and wrote while everyone went back to the hot springs. We headed home, happy that we didn't have to chain up and relieved we weren't in the line of traffic heading up to Government Camp.
I'll post the page tally after I have a chance to figure it all out or just wait until tomorrow. I still have some work to do tonight. I do know I revised 9 pages of Chapter 5 on paper and wrote two new scenes on my Alphie. Not bad for being away from home!
Here's a trip report:
We arrived at Snow Bunny Sno-park on Mt. Hood around eleven. The drive took us longer than we expected due to having to put chains on. Highway 26 was a sheet of ice. The temperature was a cool 28 degrees with snow falling from the gray sky. A brisk wind blew, making it feel colder than it really was, but the four inches or so of fresh powder on the sled hill more than made up for it.
Very few people were there when we arrived. The kids (ours and another family who joined us) couldn't get enough sledding. Well, all the kids except our youngest. The wind and the snow hitting her face were a bit much. I dragged her all over the sno-park in her little baby-boggin, but that only made things worse. She hated the cold, the snow, the sled, everything. She said she wanted to go home. Now. And she never, ever wanted to go skiing.
I handed her over to hubby so I could sled a time or two. He took her down the hill, too. But she was so miserable I finally took her back to the minivan. Once inside she was back to her normally happy self. She ended up falling asleep, and I spent the next two hours in the front seat working on the book.
Her reaction was a one-eighty from our sledding trips last year. I know the weather was the biggest factor, but I also realized that my dream of having all five of us on skis this season wasn't going to happen. She's just not ready even though she'll be four in a couple of weeks and old enough for ski school. Picture me totally bummed.
As hubby and the kidlets continued sledding, the parking lot got really crowded and so did the hill. At one point the kidlets moved to a smaller hill and were rolling down sans sled. Luckily we only had one instance of blood (lip) and somehow the same kidlet ended up with scratches under his left eye. He has no idea how he did that, but I'm sure the many face plants had something to do with it.
Instead of going home after sledding, we followed our friends to Kah-nee-ta where hubby had booked us a room for the night. Kahneeta is a resort near Warm Springs. As soon as Rose saw the pool, she perked up. The warm mineral water was a perfect escape from the 38 degree temperature.
The pool was perfect for the kidlets with a shallow end where even the littlest one could touch bottom and go on a small slide by herself, a deep end with lap lanes for me and a huge slide for hubby and the other two kids. No one wanted to get out, but we had dinner reservations. All of us crashed by nine-thirty.
After breakfast, I stayed in the room and wrote while everyone went back to the hot springs. We headed home, happy that we didn't have to chain up and relieved we weren't in the line of traffic heading up to Government Camp.
I'll post the page tally after I have a chance to figure it all out or just wait until tomorrow. I still have some work to do tonight. I do know I revised 9 pages of Chapter 5 on paper and wrote two new scenes on my Alphie. Not bad for being away from home!
Wednesday, December 27, 2006
Snow day
Tuesday's Tally:
New pages written: a lot but you wouldn't know it based on the lost pages (goal: 6.2 pages per day)
Old pages revised on paper: 20 pages (chapter four)
Pages of revisions typed in: 20 pages
Pages lost or gained due to revisions: 7 pages lost if you look at total, but it's really a lot more than that (unfortunately)
Total page count to date: 95 (goal: 200)
Days remaining until D-day: 36 days
Emails from editor in UK: 0
Emails from agent in NY: 0
Chocolate consumed: A piece of Williams Sonoma peppermint Bark (stocking stuffer)
Junk food consumed: Slice of Baskin Robbins ice cream cake (but I would have rather had a bottle of Jubile ale)
Exercise: none (stayed in bed most of day and actually got dinner in bed. Love my wonderful hubby!)
Television watched: none
Tears: none (but wait, they'll be coming soon!)
I checked back in the archives to see where I was with the book I wrote in six weeks back in 2005. The good news is I'm not to far off from that page count. The bad news is I'm not to far off from that page count. If you're new to this blog, 10/05 was a very hard month for me. Totally my own fault, but I promised myself I wouldn't get myself in that situation again, yet here I am. Ready to enter panic mode.
Maybe I'm worrying about nothing. The first four chapters are really solid. Chapter five is almost there. I have the rest of the book outlined by chapter, too, including what countries will be visited. Next up, Argentina where the racers will learn to tango, eat bbq (not just your typical ribs) and trek across a glacier.
I'm guessing if I just had book#1 to write, I wouldn't be so concerned. But this multi-book thing is brand new to me and it's going to take some real planning. I still need to write a new synopsis for book #2 which means I'm having to do some research now. Luckily, I found a great pilot, who is helping me find an emergency landing spot in a remote wilderness, and I'm hoping to connect with some search and rescue (SAR) types.
Of course, instead of writing today, I'll be playing in the snow on Mt. Hood with the family so I really can't complain too much! I figure I can always write on my alphie during the drive. Plus I love being in the mountains so I'm justifying the day by saying it'll be a good way to fill the creative well! Something I'm definitely going to need to get me through my Jan 31st and June 1st deadlines!
New pages written: a lot but you wouldn't know it based on the lost pages (goal: 6.2 pages per day)
Old pages revised on paper: 20 pages (chapter four)
Pages of revisions typed in: 20 pages
Pages lost or gained due to revisions: 7 pages lost if you look at total, but it's really a lot more than that (unfortunately)
Total page count to date: 95 (goal: 200)
Days remaining until D-day: 36 days
Emails from editor in UK: 0
Emails from agent in NY: 0
Chocolate consumed: A piece of Williams Sonoma peppermint Bark (stocking stuffer)
Junk food consumed: Slice of Baskin Robbins ice cream cake (but I would have rather had a bottle of Jubile ale)
Exercise: none (stayed in bed most of day and actually got dinner in bed. Love my wonderful hubby!)
Television watched: none
Tears: none (but wait, they'll be coming soon!)
I checked back in the archives to see where I was with the book I wrote in six weeks back in 2005. The good news is I'm not to far off from that page count. The bad news is I'm not to far off from that page count. If you're new to this blog, 10/05 was a very hard month for me. Totally my own fault, but I promised myself I wouldn't get myself in that situation again, yet here I am. Ready to enter panic mode.
Maybe I'm worrying about nothing. The first four chapters are really solid. Chapter five is almost there. I have the rest of the book outlined by chapter, too, including what countries will be visited. Next up, Argentina where the racers will learn to tango, eat bbq (not just your typical ribs) and trek across a glacier.
I'm guessing if I just had book#1 to write, I wouldn't be so concerned. But this multi-book thing is brand new to me and it's going to take some real planning. I still need to write a new synopsis for book #2 which means I'm having to do some research now. Luckily, I found a great pilot, who is helping me find an emergency landing spot in a remote wilderness, and I'm hoping to connect with some search and rescue (SAR) types.
Of course, instead of writing today, I'll be playing in the snow on Mt. Hood with the family so I really can't complain too much! I figure I can always write on my alphie during the drive. Plus I love being in the mountains so I'm justifying the day by saying it'll be a good way to fill the creative well! Something I'm definitely going to need to get me through my Jan 31st and June 1st deadlines!
Tuesday, December 26, 2006
The Aftermath
After nine in the morning, I'm still in my jammies in bed with my iBook and listening to music on iTunes. Hubby corralled the kidlets so I could rest, but as soon as they heard the music I was treated to a rush of kisses and hugs. What a great way to start the day!
I have yet to walk downstairs. I really don't want to look at the mess we left last night. Imagine games, stocking stuffers and toys everywhere. But I'm getting hungry so I'll just have to get over it. Or close my eyes. Or ask for breakfast in bed. Hmmm, that's an idea.
I still have no voice, and a wicked cough is setting in. We're heading to Mt. Hood tomorrow for some fun in the snow so I need to recover. Fast. I've got too much to do, too many pages to write, to be sick. Plus I have to find our cold weather gear! That'll be a task in itself.
I also have to plan hubby's birthday that's coming up. When I asked what he wanted, he told me he wanted me to buy myself something from Victoria's Secret. I'll happily do that, but I still need something for us to do.
Here's what I've come up with so far. (He doesn't read the blog so I'm not giving anything away!)
Idea #1: Get snowshoes for all of us, go on a hike and have a picnic lunch.
Idea #2: Get a babysitter and go out to dinner.
Idea #3: Bowling and lunch/dinner at Big Al's
What do you think? Any of those ideas look good to you? Any other suggestions?
I have yet to walk downstairs. I really don't want to look at the mess we left last night. Imagine games, stocking stuffers and toys everywhere. But I'm getting hungry so I'll just have to get over it. Or close my eyes. Or ask for breakfast in bed. Hmmm, that's an idea.
I still have no voice, and a wicked cough is setting in. We're heading to Mt. Hood tomorrow for some fun in the snow so I need to recover. Fast. I've got too much to do, too many pages to write, to be sick. Plus I have to find our cold weather gear! That'll be a task in itself.
I also have to plan hubby's birthday that's coming up. When I asked what he wanted, he told me he wanted me to buy myself something from Victoria's Secret. I'll happily do that, but I still need something for us to do.
Here's what I've come up with so far. (He doesn't read the blog so I'm not giving anything away!)
Idea #1: Get snowshoes for all of us, go on a hike and have a picnic lunch.
Idea #2: Get a babysitter and go out to dinner.
Idea #3: Bowling and lunch/dinner at Big Al's
What do you think? Any of those ideas look good to you? Any other suggestions?
Monday, December 25, 2006
Love's Pure Light
Merry Christmas! I hope you have a wonderful day whether you celebrate this 25th day of December or not.
Last time I checked NORAD, Santa was heading West so I'm about to crawl into bed and hope I wake up this Christmas morning with my voice back! Those late nights may have finally caught up with me. Reading stories to the kidlets before they went to bed didn't help, but it's tradition and they enjoyed the stories: The Polar Express, The Donkey's Dream, The Night Before Christmas and What Star Is This.
Later today, after the presents are opened and the kidlets have settled down, we'll read the story of Jesus' birth in Luke and let them act it out using the figures from the Nativity scene we have set up under the tree. Speaking of which...
Sitting in Mass at my parents' church, we watched children from the parish process down the aisle dressed like figures from the Nativity scene. Mary, Joseph, baby Jesus, a choir angels, shepherds and a whole lot of kings (with a couple queens tossed in, too!) Following the priest's Blessing of the Crib, we sang Silent Night. The third stanza really resonated with me (love is what this day is all about!) so I'll leave you with that:
Silent night, holy night
Son of God, love's pure light
Radiant beams from Thy holy face,
With the dawn of redeeming grace,
Jesus, Lord, at Thy birth
Jesus, Lord, at Thy birth.
Wishing you peace, joy and love!
Melissa
xoxox
Last time I checked NORAD, Santa was heading West so I'm about to crawl into bed and hope I wake up this Christmas morning with my voice back! Those late nights may have finally caught up with me. Reading stories to the kidlets before they went to bed didn't help, but it's tradition and they enjoyed the stories: The Polar Express, The Donkey's Dream, The Night Before Christmas and What Star Is This.
Later today, after the presents are opened and the kidlets have settled down, we'll read the story of Jesus' birth in Luke and let them act it out using the figures from the Nativity scene we have set up under the tree. Speaking of which...
Sitting in Mass at my parents' church, we watched children from the parish process down the aisle dressed like figures from the Nativity scene. Mary, Joseph, baby Jesus, a choir angels, shepherds and a whole lot of kings (with a couple queens tossed in, too!) Following the priest's Blessing of the Crib, we sang Silent Night. The third stanza really resonated with me (love is what this day is all about!) so I'll leave you with that:
Silent night, holy night
Son of God, love's pure light
Radiant beams from Thy holy face,
With the dawn of redeeming grace,
Jesus, Lord, at Thy birth
Jesus, Lord, at Thy birth.
Wishing you peace, joy and love!
Melissa
xoxox
Sunday, December 24, 2006
Twas the Night Before Christmas
Okay, it's actually the day before Christmas, but somewhere east of us in the world it's night!
Yesterday, I ended up cutting Belize as one of the race locales from the book. I had a couple of really cool tasks lava tubing and descending on ropes through this cave. But I realized I needed to be in Guatemala instead. So I cut ten pages (that really hurt I will admit) and took my hero and heroine to Guatemala City and then onto the market at Chichicastengo. It works better now, but with such a tight deadline I hate losing pages. I wasn't planning to write today, but it looks like I might have to since I'm even further behind. But I'll see how I feel about it later.
We're about to head down to Salem, the capitol of Oregon, to spend the day with my family, then we'll be home tonight to open one gift (always pajamas) and leave a plate of cookies out for Santa.
Good luck with all your last minute preparations!
Yesterday, I ended up cutting Belize as one of the race locales from the book. I had a couple of really cool tasks lava tubing and descending on ropes through this cave. But I realized I needed to be in Guatemala instead. So I cut ten pages (that really hurt I will admit) and took my hero and heroine to Guatemala City and then onto the market at Chichicastengo. It works better now, but with such a tight deadline I hate losing pages. I wasn't planning to write today, but it looks like I might have to since I'm even further behind. But I'll see how I feel about it later.
We're about to head down to Salem, the capitol of Oregon, to spend the day with my family, then we'll be home tonight to open one gift (always pajamas) and leave a plate of cookies out for Santa.
Good luck with all your last minute preparations!
Saturday, December 23, 2006
It's beginning to look a lot like Christmas
The Christmas To Do List is almost complete. The kidlets visited Santa last night. The line was long, but they didn't mind. The picture actually came out pretty cute, too. Much better then all the other ones with a crying or pouting little Rose!
Hubby surprised me this morning. I woke up early (6ish) and he was already up. When the littlest one wanted to climb in bed with me, I asked her to peek downstairs for Daddy. He was gone. So I called his cellphone. He was on his way to the mall. Two days before Christmas!
This is huge. Not that he waited until the last minute to shop. That's a given with hubby. I will never forget my first birthday after we got married. He literally ran into a store and bought the first thing that was on display. I know this because my sister and I couldn't believe what he'd gotten me when I unwrapped the package so I asked him if that's what he'd done. The sheepish expression on his face was my answer.
Anyway, that little backstory should tell you my hubby is a man who if he walks into any store that doesn't sell something he can eat or drink immediately wants to walk out. That's why I was so shocked to find out his plan for today. He wanted be at the mall (one that's near our old house in Lake Oswego, but a bit of a distance from our new one) when it opened. He wanted to get in and get out. Oh, and stop by REI, too.
I expected him to come home cranky and wanting to rip somebody's head off. The guy is my hero, but let's face it, shopping brings out the worst in him. Boy, was I wrong!
He was back by 11:30 am. His mission accomplished. And he didn't look as if he wanted to kill someone. He grabbed the kidlets and headed back to Portland for Irish dance class. He's mellowing with age or he's got his game face on.
Either way, I can't wait to see what he bought!
I'm off to the store myself to get groceries for our Christmas feast-a very kid-friendly meal. Appetizers: cheese fondue, beef stick and crackers, goat-cheese wontons and Fig marscopone phylo wraps. Dinner: Prime rib with twice-baked potatoes, green beans, salad, bread. Dessert: chocolate fondue w/fruit and other goodies, ice cream birthday cake and a cheesecake.
Hubby surprised me this morning. I woke up early (6ish) and he was already up. When the littlest one wanted to climb in bed with me, I asked her to peek downstairs for Daddy. He was gone. So I called his cellphone. He was on his way to the mall. Two days before Christmas!
This is huge. Not that he waited until the last minute to shop. That's a given with hubby. I will never forget my first birthday after we got married. He literally ran into a store and bought the first thing that was on display. I know this because my sister and I couldn't believe what he'd gotten me when I unwrapped the package so I asked him if that's what he'd done. The sheepish expression on his face was my answer.
Anyway, that little backstory should tell you my hubby is a man who if he walks into any store that doesn't sell something he can eat or drink immediately wants to walk out. That's why I was so shocked to find out his plan for today. He wanted be at the mall (one that's near our old house in Lake Oswego, but a bit of a distance from our new one) when it opened. He wanted to get in and get out. Oh, and stop by REI, too.
I expected him to come home cranky and wanting to rip somebody's head off. The guy is my hero, but let's face it, shopping brings out the worst in him. Boy, was I wrong!
He was back by 11:30 am. His mission accomplished. And he didn't look as if he wanted to kill someone. He grabbed the kidlets and headed back to Portland for Irish dance class. He's mellowing with age or he's got his game face on.
Either way, I can't wait to see what he bought!
I'm off to the store myself to get groceries for our Christmas feast-a very kid-friendly meal. Appetizers: cheese fondue, beef stick and crackers, goat-cheese wontons and Fig marscopone phylo wraps. Dinner: Prime rib with twice-baked potatoes, green beans, salad, bread. Dessert: chocolate fondue w/fruit and other goodies, ice cream birthday cake and a cheesecake.
Friday, December 22, 2006
Under the Christmas Tree
Last night was our traditional sleep under the Christmas tree night. I've done it every year since I was a little girl. Even when I lived alone in my apartment in SF's Marina District.
Of course, I didn't get to sleep until late due to the book. By then the kidlets and cats were all fast asleep. I was so tired I just plopped down on the couch with my pillow. My youngest covered me sometime during the night with a princess blanket.
On the writing front: I managed to put together a very good (if I say so myself) chapter yesterday. I hope I feel the same way when I read the pages today!
On the holiday front: I have a few more Christmas cards to send out. I meant to yesterday, but never got around to it. Today I'm taking the oldest to see OBT's The Nutcracker. One of the dancers from her 8-hand ceili team is dancing the lead. We're also going to try and squeeze in a visit to Santa. Gotta get that picture for the scrapbook I'll put together someday after I finish the two remaining baby books I've yet to start! And I have a couple more items to pick up and wrap.
Hard to believe Christmas is only a few days away! Are you ready?
Of course, I didn't get to sleep until late due to the book. By then the kidlets and cats were all fast asleep. I was so tired I just plopped down on the couch with my pillow. My youngest covered me sometime during the night with a princess blanket.
On the writing front: I managed to put together a very good (if I say so myself) chapter yesterday. I hope I feel the same way when I read the pages today!
On the holiday front: I have a few more Christmas cards to send out. I meant to yesterday, but never got around to it. Today I'm taking the oldest to see OBT's The Nutcracker. One of the dancers from her 8-hand ceili team is dancing the lead. We're also going to try and squeeze in a visit to Santa. Gotta get that picture for the scrapbook I'll put together someday after I finish the two remaining baby books I've yet to start! And I have a couple more items to pick up and wrap.
Hard to believe Christmas is only a few days away! Are you ready?
Thursday, December 21, 2006
A beautiful day
I thought a new storm was expected to blow in so I was surprised to awake to a clear blue sky. Surprised, but very happy! The temperature was in the thirties, but has creeped up to the low forties. A gorgeous December day! Just what I needed after going to bed late (2 am-ish.)
I wanted to take the kidlets for a hike around the lake, but we ended up with an extra kidlet last night because a friend is giving birth to #10, and though we had enough gloves and hats, the only extra coat was pink and purple. No go for an nine year old boy. So instead of a hike, we went to the Portand Children's Museum. Lots of children laughing and crying. Pizza Schmizza for lunch. The kidlets had a blast.
Hubby is watching them ride their bikes right now. The littlest one is napping next to me. And I'm finally getting a chance to put words on the page. Well, the screen if you want to get technical.
Hope you're having a great day!
I wanted to take the kidlets for a hike around the lake, but we ended up with an extra kidlet last night because a friend is giving birth to #10, and though we had enough gloves and hats, the only extra coat was pink and purple. No go for an nine year old boy. So instead of a hike, we went to the Portand Children's Museum. Lots of children laughing and crying. Pizza Schmizza for lunch. The kidlets had a blast.
Hubby is watching them ride their bikes right now. The littlest one is napping next to me. And I'm finally getting a chance to put words on the page. Well, the screen if you want to get technical.
Hope you're having a great day!
Wednesday, December 20, 2006
WANTED: Happy Ending
With Christmas so close (and the kidlets back home today), I won't be doing the page tally again until after the 25th. I'm writing, but not nearly as much as I should be. Story of my life, I know. But this third week of Advent is about joy. Worrying about pages written or not isn't what I need to be doing.
I don't know about you, but my heart aches for the families of the three climbers lost on Mt. Hood. Yes, they are strangers. Yes, people go missing every single day. Yet something about this story affected not only my family, but people across the nation.
The happenings on Mt. Hood riveted us. Watching the three families during the press conferences for the past week and seeing their dignity, their grace and most especially unwavering faith touched us. We wanted a happy ending for the climbers and their families, a different outcome from a few weeks before with James Kim. And, however unlikely that may seem now that the mission is in recovery mode, I still want it. I want that Christmas Miracle for the families, for the searchers, for all of us.
But then again, I'm a romance writer and happily ever afters are our specialty. I just wish I could have been the one writing this ending.
I don't know about you, but my heart aches for the families of the three climbers lost on Mt. Hood. Yes, they are strangers. Yes, people go missing every single day. Yet something about this story affected not only my family, but people across the nation.
The happenings on Mt. Hood riveted us. Watching the three families during the press conferences for the past week and seeing their dignity, their grace and most especially unwavering faith touched us. We wanted a happy ending for the climbers and their families, a different outcome from a few weeks before with James Kim. And, however unlikely that may seem now that the mission is in recovery mode, I still want it. I want that Christmas Miracle for the families, for the searchers, for all of us.
But then again, I'm a romance writer and happily ever afters are our specialty. I just wish I could have been the one writing this ending.
Sunday, December 17, 2006
Sad Day
One of the climbers was found in a snow cave on Mt. Hood today. His identity hasn't been released, and his body will be brought down tomorrow. My condolences to the families. Let's hope they find the other two climbers tomorrow. I'm still praying for a Christmas miracle for this story!
Even though I'm behind on my page count, I took Sunday off. I did, however, teach a class, finish addressing my Christmas cards and watch Beauty and the Beast's Christmas video with the kidlets. They are heading to my parents tomorrow for two nights so I'll be writing as much as I can and wrapping all the presents.
Even though I'm behind on my page count, I took Sunday off. I did, however, teach a class, finish addressing my Christmas cards and watch Beauty and the Beast's Christmas video with the kidlets. They are heading to my parents tomorrow for two nights so I'll be writing as much as I can and wrapping all the presents.
Saturday, December 16, 2006
Places I've been
My friend, Tori, had this on her blog. These are the countries I've been to:

create your own visited country map
And these are the states I've been to:

create your own personalized map of the USA
As for what else is going on, addressing Christmas cards and writing about covers it. I've been following the drama on Mt. Hood since the hero and heroine in the next book I'll write are stranded in the mountains following an emergency landing. I had a nice view of the mountain today and that filled me with hope that the three will be found soon. It looks as if the weather will be better tomorrow. Here's hoping the searchers bring them home!
If you want to know more about what's happening on Mt. Hood from those who actually know what they are talking about, check out this Cascade Climbers forum topic about the three missing climbers here.
Okay, back to work! Writing that is.
create your own visited country map
And these are the states I've been to:
create your own personalized map of the USA
As for what else is going on, addressing Christmas cards and writing about covers it. I've been following the drama on Mt. Hood since the hero and heroine in the next book I'll write are stranded in the mountains following an emergency landing. I had a nice view of the mountain today and that filled me with hope that the three will be found soon. It looks as if the weather will be better tomorrow. Here's hoping the searchers bring them home!
If you want to know more about what's happening on Mt. Hood from those who actually know what they are talking about, check out this Cascade Climbers forum topic about the three missing climbers here.
Okay, back to work! Writing that is.
Thursday, December 14, 2006
Windy Weather
A windstorm has hit the Pacific Northwest. We already lost power once tonight so I want to post this in case we lose it again. The news said we've yet to see the really high winds!
Anyway, no tally for Wednesday. I didn't write. I think I was home approx. 45 minutes between 8:30 am and 10:00 pm. I then spent the rest of the evening (if you consider 1 am evening) wrapping gifts that needed to be passed out at school and packaging up those I still need to send.
I'll post Thursday's tally once I'm finished writing for the night.
And please pray for the three climbers-Kelly, Brian and Nikko-missing on Mt. Hood, their families who must be worried sick about them and the searchers, real-life heroes waiting for a break in the weather so they can get up the mountain and do their job. My heart goes out to all of them.
Anyway, no tally for Wednesday. I didn't write. I think I was home approx. 45 minutes between 8:30 am and 10:00 pm. I then spent the rest of the evening (if you consider 1 am evening) wrapping gifts that needed to be passed out at school and packaging up those I still need to send.
I'll post Thursday's tally once I'm finished writing for the night.
And please pray for the three climbers-Kelly, Brian and Nikko-missing on Mt. Hood, their families who must be worried sick about them and the searchers, real-life heroes waiting for a break in the weather so they can get up the mountain and do their job. My heart goes out to all of them.
Wednesday, December 13, 2006
Non-Writing Wednesdays
First the tally for Tuesday:
New pages written: 5 (goal: 6.2 pages per day)
Old pages revised on paper: 10 (revised only for the art museum-see yesterday's post for more info)
Pages of revisions typed in: 0
Pages lost or gained due to revisions: 0
Total page count to date: 102 (goal: 200)
Days remaining until D-day: 49 days (if I counted correctly)
Emails from editor in UK: 0
Emails from agent in NY: 0
Chocolate consumed: Mr. Goodbar
Junk food consumed: none
Exercise: none
Television watched: Borrowed Hearts (one of my fave Christmas movies!)
Tears: none
Although I was a page short of my goal, I'm psyched. Things started to gel. The words flowed, and I'm finishing the day with one scene that needs very little revisions and another scene that's started but not quite there yet. I'm hoping this means I've made it over the brick wall I always hit when I reach chapters 4 and 5. And it always happens. Every single book. I hate it!
This evening I went with my sister and brother-in-law to meet their new puppy. The plan was for us (me, hubby and unknowing kidlets) to give the puppy on Christmas Eve morning when we have brunch with my family. The more I thought about it, the more I realized that would be a really bad idea. How could I tell my kids that we had bought their cousins a dog for Christmas and not gotten them one, too? My kidlets would be devastated. I just couldn't do that to them, especially since my kids want a dog more than anything. They play doggy all the time. Sometimes it's snow dogs (Siberian Huskies like the ones in Eight Below). Othertimes it's mutt puppies. Either way, the kids dream about having a real dog.
So when we were meeting the puppy, an adorable chocolate lab, I explained my dilemma. Sure, I missed out on seeing my niece and three nephews reaction when they saw the puppy, but I had to think of our Christmas ruined by three sad kidlets. Luckily the puppy was old enough to take home so they left with a dog! They stopped by our house so my kidlets could play with the puppy (Hershey is his new name!) Of course there were tears when they had to leave, but I realized it was so much better the way we handled it. Those mommy instincts really come in handy.
As I watched the movie tonight, I wrapped and boxed up all the gifts I need to mail. Now to get to the post office! I need to go tomorrow (well, today, if I glance at my clock) but Wednesday is the one day I have no free time. I was so busy with all the packages tonight that I still haven't planned the lesson for my class tomorrow. That's the number one item on my To Do list right now.
How are you doing with your holiday preparations? Almost there?
New pages written: 5 (goal: 6.2 pages per day)
Old pages revised on paper: 10 (revised only for the art museum-see yesterday's post for more info)
Pages of revisions typed in: 0
Pages lost or gained due to revisions: 0
Total page count to date: 102 (goal: 200)
Days remaining until D-day: 49 days (if I counted correctly)
Emails from editor in UK: 0
Emails from agent in NY: 0
Chocolate consumed: Mr. Goodbar
Junk food consumed: none
Exercise: none
Television watched: Borrowed Hearts (one of my fave Christmas movies!)
Tears: none
Although I was a page short of my goal, I'm psyched. Things started to gel. The words flowed, and I'm finishing the day with one scene that needs very little revisions and another scene that's started but not quite there yet. I'm hoping this means I've made it over the brick wall I always hit when I reach chapters 4 and 5. And it always happens. Every single book. I hate it!
This evening I went with my sister and brother-in-law to meet their new puppy. The plan was for us (me, hubby and unknowing kidlets) to give the puppy on Christmas Eve morning when we have brunch with my family. The more I thought about it, the more I realized that would be a really bad idea. How could I tell my kids that we had bought their cousins a dog for Christmas and not gotten them one, too? My kidlets would be devastated. I just couldn't do that to them, especially since my kids want a dog more than anything. They play doggy all the time. Sometimes it's snow dogs (Siberian Huskies like the ones in Eight Below). Othertimes it's mutt puppies. Either way, the kids dream about having a real dog.
So when we were meeting the puppy, an adorable chocolate lab, I explained my dilemma. Sure, I missed out on seeing my niece and three nephews reaction when they saw the puppy, but I had to think of our Christmas ruined by three sad kidlets. Luckily the puppy was old enough to take home so they left with a dog! They stopped by our house so my kidlets could play with the puppy (Hershey is his new name!) Of course there were tears when they had to leave, but I realized it was so much better the way we handled it. Those mommy instincts really come in handy.
As I watched the movie tonight, I wrapped and boxed up all the gifts I need to mail. Now to get to the post office! I need to go tomorrow (well, today, if I glance at my clock) but Wednesday is the one day I have no free time. I was so busy with all the packages tonight that I still haven't planned the lesson for my class tomorrow. That's the number one item on my To Do list right now.
How are you doing with your holiday preparations? Almost there?
Tuesday, December 12, 2006
Tuesday Trouble
So here's the tally for Monday:
New pages written: 6 (goal: 6.2 pages per day)
Old pages revised on paper: 0
Pages of revisions typed in: 0
Pages lost or gained due to revisions: 0
Total page count to date: 97 (goal: 200)
Days remaining until D-day: still haven't counted. It's over a month and a half away which seems so far away right now.
Emails from editor in UK: 0
Emails from agent in NY: 0
Chocolate consumed: Chocolate coin
Junk food consumed: Chocolate donut
Exercise: none
Television watched: 30 minutes of the live version of A Year Without A Santa Clause
Tears: none
So I'm the kind of person who follows the rules. I believe the adage, "it never hurts to ask," especially when it comes to researching a novel.
Well, in this case it did hurt. I had emailed an art museum asking some questions back in early November. I got a reply yesterday telling me they do not provide assistance for works of fiction nor would they permit a reality TV show to be filmed there. They also said "we actively exercise our rights in our name and site, particularly if we believe a work of fiction infringes on those rights." I replied telling them how I had used the museum in the scene and would change the name of the museum thinking that would be enough.
This morning I received another email (this time cc'd to two other people internal to the museum) telling me I cannot use anything that would imply their name in my book including the names of artwork displayed there or the tram to the museum. The last thing I want to do is infringe on anyone's "copyright and trademark infringement" as was stated in today's email. Legal fees are not part of our household budget.
So instead of writing my new pages, I went back to the first three chapters. I took out the three pieces of artwork that made up the race clue, rewrote a new clue with three fictional pieces of art and changed the setting to the now fictional Art Center. I also rewrote the scene removing anything that might suggest the new setting is anything like the old one. I took out the incredible view of the mountains to the ocean, the beautiful travertine stone architecture, the four pine trees greeting visitors and the named gallery that housed two of the named art pieces. It's a bummer, because the clue was a really good one that I was proud of and the setting absolutely perfect. But what's a writer going to do?
I have to wonder what would have happened had I not emailed them asking those questions especially since I eventually found the answer to one of them myself. Would my Harlequin novel had flown under the radar after its publication or would the museum have "actively" exercised their rights when the book was published? And if so, what would that have meant? If anything I've realized I don't know enough about Fair Use or copyright law and have added that to my To Do list.
I wonder how other writers deal with this. Dan Brown comes to mind. Did he ever have this problem with all the artwork and places he used when he wrote Da Vinci Code? Or did he just not ask?
New pages written: 6 (goal: 6.2 pages per day)
Old pages revised on paper: 0
Pages of revisions typed in: 0
Pages lost or gained due to revisions: 0
Total page count to date: 97 (goal: 200)
Days remaining until D-day: still haven't counted. It's over a month and a half away which seems so far away right now.
Emails from editor in UK: 0
Emails from agent in NY: 0
Chocolate consumed: Chocolate coin
Junk food consumed: Chocolate donut
Exercise: none
Television watched: 30 minutes of the live version of A Year Without A Santa Clause
Tears: none
So I'm the kind of person who follows the rules. I believe the adage, "it never hurts to ask," especially when it comes to researching a novel.
Well, in this case it did hurt. I had emailed an art museum asking some questions back in early November. I got a reply yesterday telling me they do not provide assistance for works of fiction nor would they permit a reality TV show to be filmed there. They also said "we actively exercise our rights in our name and site, particularly if we believe a work of fiction infringes on those rights." I replied telling them how I had used the museum in the scene and would change the name of the museum thinking that would be enough.
This morning I received another email (this time cc'd to two other people internal to the museum) telling me I cannot use anything that would imply their name in my book including the names of artwork displayed there or the tram to the museum. The last thing I want to do is infringe on anyone's "copyright and trademark infringement" as was stated in today's email. Legal fees are not part of our household budget.
So instead of writing my new pages, I went back to the first three chapters. I took out the three pieces of artwork that made up the race clue, rewrote a new clue with three fictional pieces of art and changed the setting to the now fictional Art Center. I also rewrote the scene removing anything that might suggest the new setting is anything like the old one. I took out the incredible view of the mountains to the ocean, the beautiful travertine stone architecture, the four pine trees greeting visitors and the named gallery that housed two of the named art pieces. It's a bummer, because the clue was a really good one that I was proud of and the setting absolutely perfect. But what's a writer going to do?
I have to wonder what would have happened had I not emailed them asking those questions especially since I eventually found the answer to one of them myself. Would my Harlequin novel had flown under the radar after its publication or would the museum have "actively" exercised their rights when the book was published? And if so, what would that have meant? If anything I've realized I don't know enough about Fair Use or copyright law and have added that to my To Do list.
I wonder how other writers deal with this. Dan Brown comes to mind. Did he ever have this problem with all the artwork and places he used when he wrote Da Vinci Code? Or did he just not ask?
Monday, December 11, 2006
Monday Monday
I haven't been posting, but I have been writing. Weekends are really hard for me with the family (not to mention dance and swim practice) so I don't know if I'll be blogging on Saturdays or Sundays. We did do a game night with three other families on Saturday night and played Catch Phrase. It was really fun and of course, the women won!
I ran into a snag with the book. Okay, it was actually a huge wall that I could not climb over. I realized I had no idea where the race was going past Los Angeles (where Chapter 3 ends.) So while I didn't write on Sunday, I did pull out the book 1,000 Places to See Before you Die and google a lot of things to make a race itinerary. It's not complete, but at least I have a framework to follow now. I also wanted a place where I could get my heroine into a swimsuit. Next stop Belize!
On the Christmas decorating front, all the villages are up. The only left to do is the front yard. I'm leaving that to Hubby. I'll give him a week before I do it myself!
I actually checked off two more items on my top ten list by getting a family photo taken (hubby did it with a remote in front of our fireplace) and having Christmas Cards made at Costco (hubby picked them up today.) The only thing left on that original Top 10 list is writing (which will always be there) and mailing my RITA books (they are packaged and ready to go. I just need to take the time to go to the PO.)
So here's the tally for Friday and Saturday:
New pages written: 12 (goal: 6.2 pages per day)
Old pages revised on paper: 0
Pages of revisions typed in: 0
Pages lost or gained due to revisions: 0
Total page count to date: 91 (goal: 200)
Days remaining until D-day: still haven't counted. It's over a month and a half away which seems so far away right now.
Emails from editor in UK: 0
Emails from agent in NY: 0
Chocolate consumed: Brownies and cookies
Junk food consumed: Eggnog shake from Burgerville
Exercise: none
Television watched: Rudolph the Rednosed Reindeer and Frosty the Snowman
Tears: none
I ran into a snag with the book. Okay, it was actually a huge wall that I could not climb over. I realized I had no idea where the race was going past Los Angeles (where Chapter 3 ends.) So while I didn't write on Sunday, I did pull out the book 1,000 Places to See Before you Die and google a lot of things to make a race itinerary. It's not complete, but at least I have a framework to follow now. I also wanted a place where I could get my heroine into a swimsuit. Next stop Belize!
On the Christmas decorating front, all the villages are up. The only left to do is the front yard. I'm leaving that to Hubby. I'll give him a week before I do it myself!
I actually checked off two more items on my top ten list by getting a family photo taken (hubby did it with a remote in front of our fireplace) and having Christmas Cards made at Costco (hubby picked them up today.) The only thing left on that original Top 10 list is writing (which will always be there) and mailing my RITA books (they are packaged and ready to go. I just need to take the time to go to the PO.)
So here's the tally for Friday and Saturday:
New pages written: 12 (goal: 6.2 pages per day)
Old pages revised on paper: 0
Pages of revisions typed in: 0
Pages lost or gained due to revisions: 0
Total page count to date: 91 (goal: 200)
Days remaining until D-day: still haven't counted. It's over a month and a half away which seems so far away right now.
Emails from editor in UK: 0
Emails from agent in NY: 0
Chocolate consumed: Brownies and cookies
Junk food consumed: Eggnog shake from Burgerville
Exercise: none
Television watched: Rudolph the Rednosed Reindeer and Frosty the Snowman
Tears: none
Thursday, December 07, 2006
Back on track
Thursday's Tally:
New pages written: 6 (goal: 6.2 pages)
Old pages revised on paper: 0
Pages of revisions typed in: 0
Pages lost or gained due to revisions: 0
Total page count to date: 79 (goal: 200)
Days remaining until D-day: still haven't counted. It's over a month and a half away which seems so far away right now.
Emails from editor in UK: 0
Emails from agent in NY: 0
Chocolate consumed: 1 gold covered chocolate coin
Junk food consumed: Filet of fish meal at McDonald's
Exercise: none
Television watched: none
Tears: none
Okay, I'm doing better. Even though I hadn't written all day (had youngest kidlet with me and was busy making sure my sister and her family would take the AKC puppy I foolishly put the opening bid on at an auction to get things started-yes, I learned my lesson and will never do that again and we all went to Irish dance tonight so we could drive through Portland International Raceway and see the Winter Wonderland showcase of lights), I had been thinking about the book.
When we got home I put the kids to bed and checked my email. Here's what my nano buddy Tiffany wrote:
I read your blog - I'm going to start sending you a** kicking e-mails! Two days without writing? Get back on the wagon! I'm looking forward to seeing some pages reported written on tomorrows blog. (insert U.S. Marine cadence chants here for inspiration!)
Gotta love friends who tell it like it is. That's just what I needed to get motivated again. I wrote my six pages tonight. Thanks, Tiff. I owe you!
New pages written: 6 (goal: 6.2 pages)
Old pages revised on paper: 0
Pages of revisions typed in: 0
Pages lost or gained due to revisions: 0
Total page count to date: 79 (goal: 200)
Days remaining until D-day: still haven't counted. It's over a month and a half away which seems so far away right now.
Emails from editor in UK: 0
Emails from agent in NY: 0
Chocolate consumed: 1 gold covered chocolate coin
Junk food consumed: Filet of fish meal at McDonald's
Exercise: none
Television watched: none
Tears: none
Okay, I'm doing better. Even though I hadn't written all day (had youngest kidlet with me and was busy making sure my sister and her family would take the AKC puppy I foolishly put the opening bid on at an auction to get things started-yes, I learned my lesson and will never do that again and we all went to Irish dance tonight so we could drive through Portland International Raceway and see the Winter Wonderland showcase of lights), I had been thinking about the book.
When we got home I put the kids to bed and checked my email. Here's what my nano buddy Tiffany wrote:
I read your blog - I'm going to start sending you a** kicking e-mails! Two days without writing? Get back on the wagon! I'm looking forward to seeing some pages reported written on tomorrows blog. (insert U.S. Marine cadence chants here for inspiration!)
Gotta love friends who tell it like it is. That's just what I needed to get motivated again. I wrote my six pages tonight. Thanks, Tiff. I owe you!
Wednesday, December 06, 2006
Not much better today
New pages written: 2 (goal: 6.2 pages)
Old pages revised on paper: 0
Pages of revisions typed in: 0
Pages lost or gained due to revisions: 0
Total page count to date: 73 (goal: 200)
Days remaining until D-day: (too tired to count them right now, but the manuscript is due January 31st.)
Emails from editor in UK: 0
Emails from agent in NY: 0
Chocolate consumed: gold covered chocolate coins (Today was St. Nicholas day!)
Junk food consumed: none
Exercise: none
Television watched: News
Tears: I few when I heard the news about James Kim's body being found. I really wanted a happy ending to the story. Prayers and condolences to Kati, Penelope and Sabine Kim. I've been following the Kim's story very closely because my heroine and hero in the continuity book are stranded.
I didn't get a lot of writing done today, but Wednesdays are always tough days for me writing wise. I have about thirty minutes not accounted for during the day. I don't even get naptime to write because the youngest kidlet naps in the car on our way back from NE Portland.
But I still managed to get a lot accomplished, non-writing stuff that is. Tonight I decorated. (I'd been putting trimming the tree off even though the tree has been up with lights on since Sunday.) I hung the stockings. Replaced items in our bookcase with Christmas themed items. I even started taking out all my Dept. 56 villages. I collect the New England Village Collection. I also booked two of the kidlets birthday parties, one in March, the other in April. Now to get the one in January figured out!
All of those things needed to be done so I don't feel bad about the lack of pages today. (Yesterday, however is another story.) I'll need to catch up on the missing pages! And fast.
Old pages revised on paper: 0
Pages of revisions typed in: 0
Pages lost or gained due to revisions: 0
Total page count to date: 73 (goal: 200)
Days remaining until D-day: (too tired to count them right now, but the manuscript is due January 31st.)
Emails from editor in UK: 0
Emails from agent in NY: 0
Chocolate consumed: gold covered chocolate coins (Today was St. Nicholas day!)
Junk food consumed: none
Exercise: none
Television watched: News
Tears: I few when I heard the news about James Kim's body being found. I really wanted a happy ending to the story. Prayers and condolences to Kati, Penelope and Sabine Kim. I've been following the Kim's story very closely because my heroine and hero in the continuity book are stranded.
I didn't get a lot of writing done today, but Wednesdays are always tough days for me writing wise. I have about thirty minutes not accounted for during the day. I don't even get naptime to write because the youngest kidlet naps in the car on our way back from NE Portland.
But I still managed to get a lot accomplished, non-writing stuff that is. Tonight I decorated. (I'd been putting trimming the tree off even though the tree has been up with lights on since Sunday.) I hung the stockings. Replaced items in our bookcase with Christmas themed items. I even started taking out all my Dept. 56 villages. I collect the New England Village Collection. I also booked two of the kidlets birthday parties, one in March, the other in April. Now to get the one in January figured out!
All of those things needed to be done so I don't feel bad about the lack of pages today. (Yesterday, however is another story.) I'll need to catch up on the missing pages! And fast.
Tuesday, December 05, 2006
Bad day
No tally because I got absolutely no writing accomplished today. The two oldest kidlets were home. I went to hear Mike Rich speak at the Willamette Writers Meeting at the Old Church in downtown Portland. I had to make 20 miter (think bishop hat) treat bags and put together a burlap sack full of grain for St. Nicholas Day tomorrow. And I still have to get things ready for our family celebration here.
I'd better do a lot better tomorrow or I'm going to be in big trouble.
I'd better do a lot better tomorrow or I'm going to be in big trouble.
Monday, December 04, 2006
Monday's Tally
Okay, here's what I did today:
New pages written: 7 (goal: 6.2 pages)
Old pages revised on paper: 0
Pages of revisions typed in: 0
Pages lost or gained due to revisions: 0
Total page count to date: 71 (goal: 200)
Days remaining until D-day: (too tired to count them right now, but the manuscript is due January 31st.)
Emails from editor in UK: 1 (I asked if she had any revisions/changes to the proposal. Answer was not yet.)
Emails from agent in NY: 0
Chocolate consumed: M&Ms, both plain and peanut
Junk food consumed: none
Exercise: none
Television watched: Heroes (am I the only one who felt a strong chemistry between Peter and Claire?)
Tears: None, though I felt like crying when I found out the two older kidlets had school cancelled tomorrow due to know water. And also was very relieved when they found the mother and her two daughters who'd been missing in Oregon since Thanksgiving weekend. Prayers that her husband is found safe, too.
A good start to this book. I'm worried about tomorrow though. Writing with the kidlets around doesn't happen for me unless hubby is home. I may try to put together an arts and crafts project for them to do so I can at least get in a little writing. And I'm still taking youngest kidlet to preschool even though I know she's going to want to stay home with the big kids.
Tomorrow night I'm going with my friend Tiffany to hear screenwriter Mike Rich talk about his new movie The Nativity Story. I haven't seen the movie yet, but really want to. I also want to see The Holiday. What about you? Any movies you want to see?
And did anyone watch Heroes? I love that show. I knew someone was going to die, but I wasn't emotionally attached to Eden so it wasn't that big a deal. I was worried it would be Matt. Huge sigh of relief it wasn't.
Okay, it's almost midnight and time to close out day 1.
New pages written: 7 (goal: 6.2 pages)
Old pages revised on paper: 0
Pages of revisions typed in: 0
Pages lost or gained due to revisions: 0
Total page count to date: 71 (goal: 200)
Days remaining until D-day: (too tired to count them right now, but the manuscript is due January 31st.)
Emails from editor in UK: 1 (I asked if she had any revisions/changes to the proposal. Answer was not yet.)
Emails from agent in NY: 0
Chocolate consumed: M&Ms, both plain and peanut
Junk food consumed: none
Exercise: none
Television watched: Heroes (am I the only one who felt a strong chemistry between Peter and Claire?)
Tears: None, though I felt like crying when I found out the two older kidlets had school cancelled tomorrow due to know water. And also was very relieved when they found the mother and her two daughters who'd been missing in Oregon since Thanksgiving weekend. Prayers that her husband is found safe, too.
A good start to this book. I'm worried about tomorrow though. Writing with the kidlets around doesn't happen for me unless hubby is home. I may try to put together an arts and crafts project for them to do so I can at least get in a little writing. And I'm still taking youngest kidlet to preschool even though I know she's going to want to stay home with the big kids.
Tomorrow night I'm going with my friend Tiffany to hear screenwriter Mike Rich talk about his new movie The Nativity Story. I haven't seen the movie yet, but really want to. I also want to see The Holiday. What about you? Any movies you want to see?
And did anyone watch Heroes? I love that show. I knew someone was going to die, but I wasn't emotionally attached to Eden so it wasn't that big a deal. I was worried it would be Matt. Huge sigh of relief it wasn't.
Okay, it's almost midnight and time to close out day 1.
Meet Jace Westfall
I'll post a tally once I finish writing for the day, but for those of you who wanted to see the inspiration for my new hero, Jace Westfall, in LAST MAN ON EARTH, here's a picture for you.
Special thinks to my good friend and fellow Hayden fan, Michelle, who downloaded this picture of actor Eric Close from a website and sent it to me when I couldn't figure out how to do it myself.
Sunday, December 03, 2006
Preparing the Tally sheet
Okay, I've been trying to get more stuff done around here (buy Christmas tree, make Advent wreath, etc), reread and revise my proposal and prepare for a writing blitz to knock out a first draft of the book. I used a similar formula that my friend LauraP came up with to help me write Plain Jane's Prince Charming in six weeks:
Pages already written = 64
Total pages needed = 200
Need to write = 136 pages
I want the complete done by the end of the month, but I know I won't be writing on Christmas Eve, Christmas day or my hubby's birthday and I'd like to take each Sunday off so that leaves me with 22 days. So I need to write 6.2 pages a day to have a complete by January 1st so I'd have a month to revise the manuscript and start figuring out my storyline for the next book. This page goal isn't a lot different from Plain Jane, which had a goal of 6.4 pages a day, so that's a good thing.
Also here's what I kept track of during the last time I had a tight deadline to reach:
New pages written: (goal)
Old pages revised on paper:
Pages of revisions typed in:
Pages lost or gained due to revisions:
Total page count to date: (goal: 200)
Days remaining until D-day:
Emails from editor in UK:
Emails from agent in NY:
Chocolate consumed:
Junk food consumed:
Exercise:
Television watched:
Pictures of Hayden downloaded:
Tears:
Since Hayden is not who I am using for inspiration for this hero, I'm debating whether to keep him in the tally. What do you think? Does anyone have any changes or things they'd like to see?
Pages already written = 64
Total pages needed = 200
Need to write = 136 pages
I want the complete done by the end of the month, but I know I won't be writing on Christmas Eve, Christmas day or my hubby's birthday and I'd like to take each Sunday off so that leaves me with 22 days. So I need to write 6.2 pages a day to have a complete by January 1st so I'd have a month to revise the manuscript and start figuring out my storyline for the next book. This page goal isn't a lot different from Plain Jane, which had a goal of 6.4 pages a day, so that's a good thing.
Also here's what I kept track of during the last time I had a tight deadline to reach:
New pages written: (goal)
Old pages revised on paper:
Pages of revisions typed in:
Pages lost or gained due to revisions:
Total page count to date: (goal: 200)
Days remaining until D-day:
Emails from editor in UK:
Emails from agent in NY:
Chocolate consumed:
Junk food consumed:
Exercise:
Television watched:
Pictures of Hayden downloaded:
Tears:
Since Hayden is not who I am using for inspiration for this hero, I'm debating whether to keep him in the tally. What do you think? Does anyone have any changes or things they'd like to see?
Friday, December 01, 2006
Here we go again...
So it's official! I've sold three books to Harlequin Romance. The three books, part of two contracts, consist of the continuity book I mentioned awhile back, the LAST MAN ON EARTH proposal I sent in before Thanksgiving and what's known as a "blind" book, meaning there is no book or proposal or even an idea yet. It's something I'll come up with once these other two projects are done.
I'm excited, yet nervous. LAST MAN ON EARTH is due on January 31st. That's two months to write a book with a little holiday called Christmas falling during that time! So starting tomorrow I'm going to be tracking my progress on the diary. I need something to keep me on the straight and narrow so I get this done. ON TIME. There is no wiggle room with this deadline. And as soon as I finish, I have to start on the next one that is due June 1st. And that one doesn't even have a proposal. YIKES!
I wasn't totally insane, however. I got more time to write the third book since I'll have the kidlets home with me during the summer. The final book is due December 1st, exactly one year from today. An entire year of deadlines!
Be careful what you wish for is all I can say. Please wish me luck and send me lots of virtual chocolate. I'm going to need it!
I'm excited, yet nervous. LAST MAN ON EARTH is due on January 31st. That's two months to write a book with a little holiday called Christmas falling during that time! So starting tomorrow I'm going to be tracking my progress on the diary. I need something to keep me on the straight and narrow so I get this done. ON TIME. There is no wiggle room with this deadline. And as soon as I finish, I have to start on the next one that is due June 1st. And that one doesn't even have a proposal. YIKES!
I wasn't totally insane, however. I got more time to write the third book since I'll have the kidlets home with me during the summer. The final book is due December 1st, exactly one year from today. An entire year of deadlines!
Be careful what you wish for is all I can say. Please wish me luck and send me lots of virtual chocolate. I'm going to need it!
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